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(BRAND NEW) Mook Mook VS Dizzy C

Open Battle

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6:10 pm
May 10, 2009


SUSPENDED

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 909

Ottawa Canada

1

Post edited 5:15 pm - May 10, 2009 by mookmook


http://www.zshare.net/audio/59…..93b15b7cc/


this b*tch felt the pain when i came like the sun of sam
i took away her sunshine and left her in the rain
“she just started with audio, mook why you do that for?“
cuz i could be poor lyrically and still do that whore
get the f**k back, cuz im so in the building
come in, i'll throw you off for that fly high feeling
you tryed to think sharp but only got your brain chopped
your a vampire rapper,you use your fangs cuz you aint hot
if you feel like AL after this, i got razors and ropes
like a soccer ball through a net, i'll kick you trough my posts
i got flos,wordplay,punchlines thats why you hate me
thats full of knowledge but your bars are blank like a space key
give your mixtapes free,its still gonna be a scam
your not a blind rapper but your never gonna see a fan
with a stinky b*tch like you,im afraid for a skunk
dizzy,you couldnt come hard if you abstained for a month


the words in dark are the rhyme syllables


throw a party at your house and i'll pop your guest list
i'll put my tool in your mouth and im not your dentist
b*tch,your so not a beast, your soft like the beauty
your rhymes full of s**t like you hooped your lyrics in a booty   hooped is hiding something in the ass
your rhymes not toxic,its easy to breath your rap
my rhymes like the ring video,you'll decease to that       the ring movie, 7 DAAAYSSSS
that lyrical murder bulls**t isn't gonna make you the winner
dumb b*tch,you'll break your nails if you ever squeeze a trigger
i got toughts to f**k you but more dreams to spill your guts
your good with tea bag,it's the only way your skills are nuts   tea bag is sucking balls
forget rap, your only carreer's with the hoes and strippers
cuz you don't flo at all like the frozen rivers
f**k the booth,stay on the corner,go get those cars
you can't tie this battle you came with velcro bars
if you even look at me wrong, b*tch, i'll hit your eyes
your lyrics not dope so i won't  flip your lines

FIRST 2 BARS IS ABOUT HOW I WON THE LAST BATTLE

SUN OF SAM: FAMOUS SERIAL KILLER

BAR 3 AND 4 IS ABOUT AJAYTHEKID SAYING ITS DIZZY'S FIRST AUDIO

VAMPIRE RAPPER BAR IS ABOUT SHE'S KNOWN FOR BITING LYRICS

THE BAR ABOUT MR AL IS FROM HIS SUICIDE DISCUSSION, RAZORS TO SLICE WRISTS, ROPES TO HANG YOURSELF

THE THROUGH MY POSTS BAR IS : POSTS ON SHADOWVILLE

THE SPACE KEY BAR IS :  ON THE COMPUTER KEYBOARDS, THE SPACE KEY AS NO LETTERS OR NUMBERS OR SINGS ON IT

THE COME HARD BAR IS : CUM HARD

THE BAR WHERE I SAY: GO GET THOSE CARS IS HOES ON THE CORNER, TRYIN TO PICK UP CUSTIES IN THEIR CARS, WHEN THEY DRIVE BY

THE LAST BAR ABOUT LYRICS NOT DOPE, I WONT EVEN FLIP YOUR LINES  IS :  FLIPPING DOPE


AGENT AHLEX said : You must’ve not seen any of my past posts or talked to Cobra? lol I’m pretty twisted for a nerd living in the suburbs… ……the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem


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7:15 pm
May 10, 2009


Dizzy C

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4430

Conway, SC

2

wow lol i will have my done by tomorrow, mook mook i hope your ready kid :)

Open up ya mind and eat away at ya concious.

7:17 pm
May 10, 2009


mc anonymous

Adept

Posts: 151

3

Well I am impressed Mr Mook Mook. Good work. 

forum.trshady.com REPRESENTING THE TR FAMILY. BRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!

2:08 pm
May 11, 2009


SUSPENDED

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 909

Ottawa Canada

4

AGENT AHLEX said : You must’ve not seen any of my past posts or talked to Cobra? lol I’m pretty twisted for a nerd living in the suburbs… ……the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem

2:40 pm
May 11, 2009


mobettamochedda

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 821

Staten Island, NY

5

mookmook said:

Post edited 6:15 pm - May 10, 2009 by mookmook


http://www.zshare.net/audio/59…..93b15b7cc/


this b*tch felt the pain when i came like the sun of sam
i took away her sunshine and left her in the rain
“she just started with audio, mook why you do that for?“
cuz i could be poor lyrically and still do that whore
get the f**k back, cuz im so in the building
come in, i'll throw you off for that fly high feeling
you tryed to think sharp but only got your brain chopped
your a vampire rapper,you use your fangs cuz you aint hot
if you feel like AL after this, i got razors and ropes
like a soccer ball through a net, i'll kick you trough my posts
i got flos,wordplay,punchlines thats why you hate me
thats full of knowledge but your bars are blank like a space key
give your mixtapes free,its still gonna be a scam
your not a blind rapper but your never gonna see a fan
with a stinky b*tch like you,im afraid for a skunk
dizzy,you couldnt come hard if you abstained for a month


the words in dark are the rhyme syllables


throw a party at your house and i'll pop your guest list
i'll put my tool in your mouth and im not your dentist
b*tch,your so not a beast, your soft like the beauty
your rhymes full of s**t like you hooped your lyrics in a booty   hooped is hiding something in the ass
your rhymes not toxic,its easy to breath your rap
my rhymes like the ring video,you'll decease to that       the ring movie, 7 DAAAYSSSS
that lyrical murder bulls**t isn't gonna make you the winner
dumb b*tch,you'll break your nails if you ever squeeze a trigger

i got toughts to f**k you but more dreams to spill your guts
your good with tea bag,it's the only way your skills are nuts   tea bag is sucking balls
forget rap, your only carreer's with the hoes and strippers
cuz you don't flo at all like the frozen rivers

f**k the booth,stay on the corner,go get those cars
you can't tie this battle you came with velcro bars
if you even look at me wrong, b*tch, i'll hit your eyes
your lyrics not dope so i won't  flip your lines

FIRST 2 BARS IS ABOUT HOW I WON THE LAST BATTLE

SUN OF SAM: FAMOUS SERIAL KILLER

BAR 3 AND 4 IS ABOUT AJAYTHEKID SAYING ITS DIZZY'S FIRST AUDIO

VAMPIRE RAPPER BAR IS ABOUT SHE'S KNOWN FOR BITING LYRICS

THE BAR ABOUT MR AL IS FROM HIS SUICIDE DISCUSSION, RAZORS TO SLICE WRISTS, ROPES TO HANG YOURSELF

THE THROUGH MY POSTS BAR IS : POSTS ON SHADOWVILLE

THE SPACE KEY BAR IS :  ON THE COMPUTER KEYBOARDS, THE SPACE KEY AS NO LETTERS OR NUMBERS OR SINGS ON IT

THE COME HARD BAR IS : CUM HARD

THE BAR WHERE I SAY: GO GET THOSE CARS IS HOES ON THE CORNER, TRYIN TO PICK UP CUSTIES IN THEIR CARS, WHEN THEY DRIVE BY

THE LAST BAR ABOUT LYRICS NOT DOPE, I WONT EVEN FLIP YOUR LINES  IS :  FLIPPING DOPE



Surprised OH SHIT!!!!

Dizzy betta come xtra HARD!!!!

4MyFam is the label and the team that I Rep….All day we blue ray while u stuck on cassette..

2:46 pm
May 11, 2009


mobettamochedda

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 821

Staten Island, NY

6

He said “Fuck this bulls**t like 40 times”…and said every curse in the book..

Peep the way he said audio…CRACK!!!!!

4MyFam is the label and the team that I Rep….All day we blue ray while u stuck on cassette..

4:14 pm
May 11, 2009


Dizzy C

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4430

Conway, SC

7

s**t i will trust me i got alot of s**t in store >=) but i think imma have to post pone mine cause i cant find my Mp3 player -.-

Open up ya mind and eat away at ya concious.

4:39 pm
May 11, 2009


AJay tha Kidd

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 3381

Jacksonville, FL

8

mookmook said:

Post edited 6:15 pm - May 10, 2009 by mookmook


http://www.zshare.net/audio/59…..93b15b7cc/


this b*tch felt the pain when i came like the sun of sam
i took away her sunshine and left her in the rain
“she just started with audio, mook why you do that for?“
cuz i could be poor lyrically and still do that whore
get the f**k back, cuz im so in the building
come in, i'll throw you off for that fly high feeling
you tryed to think sharp but only got your brain chopped
your a vampire rapper,you use your fangs cuz you aint hot
if you feel like AL after this, i got razors and ropes
like a soccer ball through a net, i'll kick you trough my posts
i got flos,wordplay,punchlines thats why you hate me
thats full of knowledge but your bars are blank like a space key
give your mixtapes free,its still gonna be a scam
your not a blind rapper but your never gonna see a fan
with a stinky b*tch like you,im afraid for a skunk
dizzy,you couldnt come hard if you abstained for a month


the words in dark are the rhyme syllables


throw a party at your house and i'll pop your guest list
i'll put my tool in your mouth and im not your dentist
b*tch,your so not a beast, your soft like the beauty
your rhymes full of s**t like you hooped your lyrics in a booty   hooped is hiding something in the ass
your rhymes not toxic,its easy to breath your rap
my rhymes like the ring video,you'll decease to that       the ring movie, 7 DAAAYSSSS
that lyrical murder bulls**t isn't gonna make you the winner
dumb b*tch,you'll break your nails if you ever squeeze a trigger
i got toughts to f**k you but more dreams to spill your guts
your good with tea bag,it's the only way your skills are nuts   tea bag is sucking balls
forget rap, your only carreer's with the hoes and strippers
cuz you don't flo at all like the frozen rivers
f**k the booth,stay on the corner,go get those cars
you can't tie this battle you came with velcro bars
if you even look at me wrong, b*tch, i'll hit your eyes
your lyrics not dope so i won't  flip your lines

FIRST 2 BARS IS ABOUT HOW I WON THE LAST BATTLE

SUN OF SAM: FAMOUS SERIAL KILLER

BAR 3 AND 4 IS ABOUT AJAYTHEKID SAYING ITS DIZZY'S FIRST AUDIO

VAMPIRE RAPPER BAR IS ABOUT SHE'S KNOWN FOR BITING LYRICS

THE BAR ABOUT MR AL IS FROM HIS SUICIDE DISCUSSION, RAZORS TO SLICE WRISTS, ROPES TO HANG YOURSELF

THE THROUGH MY POSTS BAR IS : POSTS ON SHADOWVILLE

THE SPACE KEY BAR IS :  ON THE COMPUTER KEYBOARDS, THE SPACE KEY AS NO LETTERS OR NUMBERS OR SINGS ON IT

THE COME HARD BAR IS : CUM HARD

THE BAR WHERE I SAY: GO GET THOSE CARS IS HOES ON THE CORNER, TRYIN TO PICK UP CUSTIES IN THEIR CARS, WHEN THEY DRIVE BY

THE LAST BAR ABOUT LYRICS NOT DOPE, I WONT EVEN FLIP YOUR LINES  IS :  FLIPPING DOPE



i'm impressed son

http://www.datpiff.com/AJay-tha-Kidd-Lil-am-The-Epidemic-mixtape.226982.html <—the epidemic - RH

8:09 pm
May 11, 2009


james r.

Disciple

Posts: 10

9

Dizzy C said:

s**t i will trust me i got alot of s**t in store >=) but i think imma have to post pone mine cause i cant find my Mp3 player -.-


Get an $8 mic from Wal*Mart and record on that. It'll sound better. Mix it with Cool Edit or something so you have decent quality. When you bring out that “s**t” you have “in store” make sure you listen to the beat you're going to record on and rewrite and make adjustments where necessary. If you're honestly not sure of what flow is then listen to some Biggie/Jay-Z/Eminem/Cassidy and listen to how the words lay into the beat. I'm not trying to diss you, I'm honestly trying to help you out. You come the same way you did last time then you'll get embarrassed.


Mook Mook. Much better than last time man. Good job man. I'll give a full breakdown of what I liked/didn't whenever Dizzy drops her s**t.

3:02 am
May 12, 2009


Dizzy C

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4430

Conway, SC

10

james r. said:

Dizzy C said:

s**t i will trust me i got alot of s**t in store >=) but i think imma have to post pone mine cause i cant find my Mp3 player -.-


Get an $8 mic from Wal*Mart and record on that. It'll sound better. Mix it with Cool Edit or something so you have decent quality. When you bring out that “s**t” you have “in store” make sure you listen to the beat you're going to record on and rewrite and make adjustments where necessary. If you're honestly not sure of what flow is then listen to some Biggie/Jay-Z/Eminem/Cassidy and listen to how the words lay into the beat. I'm not trying to diss you, I'm honestly trying to help you out. You come the same way you did last time then you'll get embarrassed.


Mook Mook. Much better than last time man. Good job man. I'll give a full breakdown of what I liked/didn't whenever Dizzy drops her s**t.


thnx i appreciate it though, but i kno wat beat im using and i just finished writing it today and went over it many times, the beat im using goes perfectly with the battle

Open up ya mind and eat away at ya concious.