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E.C.K. vs Flipsizzle

Open Battle

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5:28 pm
September 12, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

1

ill have one up by tomorrow afternoon


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9:13 pm
September 12, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

2

k heres mine btw im usin a 10 dollar mic from walmart and the program audacity so tha qualitys not that great so if you could not judge on quality id appreciate it thats tha best i can get it for now heres tha link

http://www.myspace.com/jay70000000  

its called sizzleflips battle rap ull find it

9:31 pm
September 12, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

3

btw this is my first actual battle lol

9:36 pm
September 12, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

4

leave me some feedback too dont vote jus tell me wat ya think

10:10 pm
September 12, 2009


Asher

Initiate

Posts: 39

sydney, australia

5

hahaha, what a sickcunt. im currently writing a song write now to your instrumental. funny.


wow bro, i gotta say with a ten dollar mic your quality sounds better than alotta people with 400 dollar mics! your volume was GREAT, it brings much more mic presence in your verse. the chorus was whack though. your overdubs where just too much. but once you learn some good recording techniques you'll fix that.

i thought your flow was great. it was always on point. your lines wernt over stretched or too tight. you had very good momentum.

but unfortunatly, there was not much behind most of your lines. i know your just starting out (so keep in mind i think your great for the time you been doin this) but you need to take care in your lines. especially for battles. your punches just didnt hit hard bro. they were very monotonous, generic and weak.

so tips for next time, try and attack your opponents directly, instead of hyping yourself up to invisible crowds.


peace!

im from biblical-dawns, unpredictable the mirical-born bungie jumping outta stomachs from umbilical-cords! - asher

10:14 pm
September 12, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

6

Asher said:

hahaha, what a sickcunt. im currently writing a song write now to your instrumental. funny.


wow bro, i gotta say with a ten dollar mic your quality sounds better than alotta people with 400 dollar mics! your volume was GREAT, it brings much more mic presence in your verse. the chorus was whack though. your overdubs where just too much. but once you learn some good recording techniques you'll fix that.

i thought your flow was great. it was always on point. your lines wernt over stretched or too tight. you had very good momentum.

but unfortunatly, there was not much behind most of your lines. i know your just starting out (so keep in mind i think your great for the time you been doin this) but you need to take care in your lines. especially for battles. your punches just didnt hit hard bro. they were very monotonous, generic and weak.

so tips for next time, try and attack your opponents directly, instead of hyping yourself up to invisible crowds.


peace!


aight ill keep that in mind good looks homie imma work on all of that for my next battle

10:30 pm
September 12, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

7

if any one can help me on this i think tha problem wit this track is its supposed to be a battle but its not really like a battle rap any advice on like punchlines n s**t would b appreciated

1:46 am
September 13, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

8

any other feedback on my part?

2:17 am
September 13, 2009


Jay E-Z

Journeyman

Posts: 87

9

dam wit all tha ppl on this site i thought id have a little more haha

4:47 am
September 13, 2009


Asher

Initiate

Posts: 39

sydney, australia

10

haha, f**k it bro. dudes to busy on trying to get there own feed, its silly.


when it comes to your battle punchlines, (some might dissagree) you need to be creative and id say be funny and clever. use what ever you can against them personally.

most may consider -

'il shoot you in the face, grab your arms till they break

finish off ya whole fam when they come to ya wake'

a good punch… but to be honest (even though its 99% of 'battle' material goin around) they are the weakest form of punches. because there to indirect and generic. generic meaning that they can be used for anything and anyone.


here is a VERY good battle rapper, named DZK. this song is the meaning of 'battle'

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v…..nc8CH5kzgA

sorry couldnt find out how to post the link. so coppy and past

im from biblical-dawns, unpredictable the mirical-born bungie jumping outta stomachs from umbilical-cords! - asher