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Jaz vs. LowNightMare

Open Battle

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1:09 am
October 1, 2009


ToksicK (AKA Jaz)

Shadowvillian

Posts: 2245

New York

31

Jesus Low, is that 2-0 already?

Check out my pages and follow/subscribe!! youtube.com/jaz8899 — soundcloud.com/toksick — @Track_Chemist —- facebook/com/toksickology

1:13 am
October 1, 2009


GC Da Don

Veteran

Posts: 344

Born in NY, but raised in WPB (561) FL

32

Post edited 12:17 am - October 1, 2009 by GC Da Don


LowNightMare said:

SuperKid of Hartless Ent. said:

LowNightMare said:

http://soundclick.com/share?so…..id=8163342


like i said i didn't even try and you can tell cause i didn't even get lyrical got some what lyrical not really  but it came out good so f**k off and i really don't care win or lose it don't matter cause like i said i did not try


maybe not cuz you didnt try but because you cant? ur garbage man for real i want that 3 min of my life back hey shadow where can i demand a refund?


looks who talking your music is the worst


Lol, LowNightMare, now you're just talkin outta your ass, 4real. I bet you didn't even give SuperKid's music a listen. SK would body you. I think your getting into this rap game a lil too late to have time to improve. I hardley ever knock someone's age when it comes to rapping, but I honestly feel that if you're just getting serious about it at age 20 (which is the case for some, and that's cool), but are as bad as you are (which is the case for you and a few others too), you have a slim to none chance of improving anytime soon or at all, period! And if you're telling me that I have my facts wrong and that you've already been rapping for a few years now, you're just making things look worse for yourself.

You're not as good as you think you are, and no matter how many times you claim to be up there with the best on this sight, you're not. Talking wont change that, put out a song out with no excuses as to why it isn't any good and let others be the judge of where you're at lyrically.

FREE REMY MA / R.I.P. Ryan “Woodie” Wood

1:24 am
October 1, 2009


ToksicK (AKA Jaz)

Shadowvillian

Posts: 2245

New York

33

GC Da Don said:

Post edited 1:17 am - October 1, 2009 by GC Da Don


LowNightMare said:

SuperKid of Hartless Ent. said:

LowNightMare said:

http://soundclick.com/share?so…..id=8163342


like i said i didn't even try and you can tell cause i didn't even get lyrical got some what lyrical not really  but it came out good so f**k off and i really don't care win or lose it don't matter cause like i said i did not try


maybe not cuz you didnt try but because you cant? ur garbage man for real i want that 3 min of my life back hey shadow where can i demand a refund?


looks who talking your music is the worst


Lol, LowNightMare, now you're just talkin outta your ass, 4real. I bet you didn't even give SuperKid's music a listen. SK would body you. I think your getting into this rap game a lil too late to have time to improve. I hardley ever knock someone's age when it comes to rapping, but I honestly feel that if you're just getting serious about it at age 20 (which is the case for some, and that's cool), but are as bad as you are (which is the case for you and a few others too), you have a slim to none chance of improving anytime soon or at all, period! And if you're telling me that I have my facts wrong and that you've already been rapping for a few years now, you're just making things look worse for yourself.

You're not as good as you think you are, and no matter how many times you claim to be up there with the best on this sight, you're not. Talking wont change that, put out a song out with no excuses as to why it isn't any good and let others be the judge of where you're at lyrically.


Is that a vote? lol

Check out my pages and follow/subscribe!! youtube.com/jaz8899 — soundcloud.com/toksick — @Track_Chemist —- facebook/com/toksickology

1:30 am
October 1, 2009


GC Da Don

Veteran

Posts: 344

Born in NY, but raised in WPB (561) FL

34

Jaz said:

GC Da Don said:

Post edited 1:17 am - October 1, 2009 by GC Da Don


LowNightMare said:

SuperKid of Hartless Ent. said:

LowNightMare said:

http://soundclick.com/share?so…..id=8163342


like i said i didn't even try and you can tell cause i didn't even get lyrical got some what lyrical not really  but it came out good so f**k off and i really don't care win or lose it don't matter cause like i said i did not try


maybe not cuz you didnt try but because you cant? ur garbage man for real i want that 3 min of my life back hey shadow where can i demand a refund?


looks who talking your music is the worst


Lol, LowNightMare, now you're just talkin outta your ass, 4real. I bet you didn't even give SuperKid's music a listen. SK would body you. I think your getting into this rap game a lil too late to have time to improve. I hardley ever knock someone's age when it comes to rapping, but I honestly feel that if you're just getting serious about it at age 20 (which is the case for some, and that's cool), but are as bad as you are (which is the case for you and a few others too), you have a slim to none chance of improving anytime soon or at all, period! And if you're telling me that I have my facts wrong and that you've already been rapping for a few years now, you're just making things look worse for yourself.

You're not as good as you think you are, and no matter how many times you claim to be up there with the best on this sight, you're not. Talking wont change that, put out a song out with no excuses as to why it isn't any good and let others be the judge of where you're at lyrically.


Is that a vote? lol


Lol, I wrote that before hearing your verse. And after just hearing it….Hell ya, that's a vote, lol. So is that 3-0 for Jaz or wat?

FREE REMY MA / R.I.P. Ryan “Woodie” Wood

1:33 am
October 1, 2009


ToksicK (AKA Jaz)

Shadowvillian

Posts: 2245

New York

35

I believe it is haha. 

Check out my pages and follow/subscribe!! youtube.com/jaz8899 — soundcloud.com/toksick — @Track_Chemist —- facebook/com/toksickology

1:48 am
October 1, 2009


Dris the Sickemceeducer

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 816

Queens, NY

36

My verse is written, I'll have the recorded version posted up before I leave for class tomorrow… At this point I think the voting should be about who bodied Low the worst lmao.

https://soundcloud.com/dris-official - New hotness http://soundclick.com/drisbeats - Old and busted

6:04 am
October 1, 2009


Asher

Initiate

Posts: 39

sydney, australia

37

nice track jaz. i really liked the quality and your style. very unusual and different. very unique in a great way. had some ok lines in there, way to shout out for the aussie wombat! haha.

flow was a lil off in one or two lines. but thats it


low night mare….. mate, gotta say, that wasnt a good track at all. flow was all over the place, quality was horrible. rhymes were horrible and i couldnt even understand you man. some of your words that you stretch OOOUUUTTT like this just sounded rediculous.


jaz

im from biblical-dawns, unpredictable the mirical-born bungie jumping outta stomachs from umbilical-cords! - asher

8:35 am
October 1, 2009


Dris the Sickemceeducer

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 816

Queens, NY

38

Post edited 7:39 am - October 1, 2009 by Dris


http://soundclick.com/share?so…..id=8165415

Theres my track

Im not a fan of the down syndrome flow

cat got ya tounge or ya missing a couple of chromosomes

next master of bations, sound like ya jerkin off on the microphone

leave the poor thing alone get yourself hooked on phonics

and annunciate clearly so you dont sound like your hooked on tonnniiicccc

low rider or low nightmare, i dont know but your rapping flow definately has hydrolics (up and down)

get a grip and realize f**kin facts, you're an MC in the sense ya style is mexi-cant fam
ya chick looks like a man,

and the pubic hairs on her chin and shaved head dont really help her stance (soundclick photo, you'll get it)

with an inspiration like that? I cant blame a dude for rappin whack

get ya cap guns and saddles packed,

get the f**k out of shadowvilles lands with ya arrogant ass…

youre not what you say like these evony ads… you wanny rid play me one of your tracks,

then i MIGHT collapse

https://soundcloud.com/dris-official - New hotness http://soundclick.com/drisbeats - Old and busted

9:16 am
October 1, 2009


Silverback

Adept

Posts: 175

Berlin

39

bahahaha vote goes to dris on low v dris and jaz v dris

(jaz v dris purely just coz i like dris' sound a bit more)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1002922

11:14 am
October 1, 2009


LowNightMare

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 824

Texas

40

Jaz said:

Post edited 1:06 am - October 1, 2009 by Jaz


And here's the lyrics:


When I'm through they won't find you like a four leaf clover
Now I'm leapin over, you just like I told ya
I would, you should back off now
This hack's goin down
Warned you once but you still came around
Still low pro, but I'm not to be tested
Still won't go, cuz this b*tch needs a lesson
Still don't know with who he's messin
Jaz
No escape from the ring, this is mortal kombat
Dug yourself a grave like a f**kin wombat              <— Wombats dig tunnels, lol
Nothin like you say, we already found that
Put yourself too high, but I'll still drown that
You said your girl is your inspiration                        <—It's on his soundclick
Well I hurled when I seen her face and
No wonder your music's wastin
All the time of all these patient
People who have been here waitin
To see me wreck this hatin
Bitch who needs quick replacin
Well I speak for Shadow nation
Nightmare is not worth facin


okay now you got me in to it i will really battle now that's pretty low like ja saying eminem's lil girl theres a line you don't cross but this ain't over

LowNightMare aka Soldier Of Da Ghetto