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12:13 am
September 16, 2009
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Asher
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LR, you seriously need to work on those overdubs in the first half of your verse. they were dreadful bro. your entire voice tone was contridicting the sence of 'hardcoreness' you seemed to be going for. if your gonna rap like you did, talkin some violent-s**t, then you gotta be VIOLENT KID! no over dubs with a weak voice because its not doin you justice.
work those multies, work those punchlines and work that flow
good luck for next time!
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im from biblical-dawns, unpredictable the mirical-born
bungie jumping outta stomachs from umbilical-cords! - asher
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1:45 pm
September 16, 2009
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KoreanNuke of Eternal Conflict
Master Shadowvillian
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iight so its 3-0 and my record is 3-0 thanks yall and believe it or not my flow DID improve alot but iight ill work on that thanks
nice battle LR
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6:04 pm
October 11, 2009
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wigge
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Buh for Michael Jackson jokes :(.
K.Nuke killed this one ,not even close.
Nice delivery on your side but flows need a little work, no biggie though.
Pzz
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6:24 pm
October 11, 2009
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KoreanNuke of Eternal Conflict
Master Shadowvillian
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wigge said:
Buh for Michael Jackson jokes :(.
K.Nuke killed this one ,not even close.
Nice delivery on your side but flows need a little work, no biggie though.
Pzz
haha thanx although this was long time ago haha my delievery improved alot since then haha
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