Sorry, Al. I didn't mean any offense to you, sir. I didn't really feel like comparing Mook's track to your's because it would be pointless. I mean, your verse had content, so you're already lightyears ahead of mook.  

Your lyrics are on point, as usual. Your flow is solid and consistent, easy to jive with. I think you need to work on your delivery, you sound kind of constrained. I reccomend listening to Gorilla Zoe, David Banner, and Mystikal, and sing along out loud.You have a southern-esque structure, so you might benenfit the most from studying Zoe & TI. Your hook is good, but kind of constrained as well. Pretty good s**t, bro. You just need to get that delivery ironed out and you'll be too hot to touch.

daaaaannnmmmmm i need to improve big time =[ one day ill be better then AL =] al though its gon take a LOOONG time to get to your level =] good work as always AL and ey for your delievery remember that song lyrical war? do it like the intro to that dude then youd be good =]

Mr. AL of The Storm Squad said:

LilJeezy said:

daaaaannnmmmmm i need to improve big time =[ one day ill be better then AL =] al though its gon take a LOOONG time to get to your level =] good work as always AL and ey for your delievery remember that song lyrical war? do it like the intro to that dude then youd be good =]

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you must mean Wondas.

Yeah he's sick.

“f**kas wanna test me, and come against this menace/

well I'll decapitate your head, and have myself a game of tennis/”

“I'm a pistol grippin sonofab*tch, and I'm grippin it tight//

I'm a smooth criminal. Striking in the heat of the night//”