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4:18 pm April 20, 2009
| king cobra
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Lets see….
Typh, your structure was all over the place throughout your verse…need to fix that up. A few personals here in there but they were small shots. And you DEF. need to work on your punches. I think your next battle you should focus mostly on punches.
Ajay….ugh, your battles are good to hear man but damn, upgrade that mic. you're gonna kill me here.
strucure and flow was all good, the punches were on point, I liked it better than typh's verse, so yeah…just work on steppin those punches up one more level and you'll be good.
I vote Ajay.
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4:25 pm April 20, 2009
| Typhoon
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I think that's 3 Ajay. As a mod, you can close right? I agree on what you said. I was tryin to rush due to my sister coming home and kicking me out cause she's tired lol. I could record at my house, but too much mofuggin kids.
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4:38 pm April 20, 2009
| AJay tha Kidd
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King Cobra said:
Lets see….
Typh, your structure was all over the place throughout your verse…need to fix that up. A few personals here in there but they were small shots. And you DEF. need to work on your punches. I think your next battle you should focus mostly on punches.
Ajay….ugh, your battles are good to hear man but damn, upgrade that mic. you're gonna kill me here.
strucure and flow was all good, the punches were on point, I liked it better than typh's verse, so yeah…just work on steppin those punches up one more level and you'll be good.
I vote Ajay.
preciate that homie, yeah dawg, soon as I get some money I'ma get off this walmart mic s**t. I also need a new program lol.
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http://www.datpiff.com/AJay-tha-Kidd-Lil-am-The-Epidemic-mixtape.226982.html <—the epidemic - RH
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10:22 pm April 21, 2009
| jah_sodier
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battle record 4-1 BEAT mook mook, ,ajay the kid, j-duce , rozwell and loss against loose cannon.
BRIM BlOOd
4MYFAMENT…… SOOWOO
YO! MO WADUP, GRIT WADUP, CHOSE WADUP
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10:26 pm April 21, 2009
| AJay tha Kidd
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jah_sodier said:
I VOTE FOR TYPHOON
Mm, too bad I already won
Sorry hater.
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http://www.datpiff.com/AJay-tha-Kidd-Lil-am-The-Epidemic-mixtape.226982.html <—the epidemic - RH
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