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The Wait Is Over Mr. Typhoon

Open Battle

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4:18 pm
April 20, 2009


king cobra

Posts: 2754

41

Lets see….

Typh, your structure was all over the place throughout your verse…need to fix that up. A few personals here in there but they were small shots. And you DEF. need to work on your punches. I think your next battle you should focus mostly on punches.


Ajay….ugh, your battles are good to hear man but damn, upgrade that mic. you're gonna kill me here.

strucure and flow was all good, the punches were on point, I liked it better than typh's verse, so yeah…just work on steppin those punches up one more level and you'll be good.


I vote Ajay.

4:25 pm
April 20, 2009


Typhoon

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 3105

Zanesville, OH

42

I think that's 3 Ajay. As a mod, you can close right? I agree on what you said. I was tryin to rush due to my sister coming home and kicking me out cause she's tired lol. I could record at my house, but too much mofuggin kids.

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4:38 pm
April 20, 2009


AJay tha Kidd

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 3381

Jacksonville, FL

43

King Cobra said:

Lets see….

Typh, your structure was all over the place throughout your verse…need to fix that up. A few personals here in there but they were small shots. And you DEF. need to work on your punches. I think your next battle you should focus mostly on punches.


Ajay….ugh, your battles are good to hear man but damn, upgrade that mic. you're gonna kill me here.

strucure and flow was all good, the punches were on point, I liked it better than typh's verse, so yeah…just work on steppin those punches up one more level and you'll be good.


I vote Ajay.


preciate that homie, yeah dawg, soon as I get some money I'ma get off this walmart mic s**t. I also need a new program lol.

http://www.datpiff.com/AJay-tha-Kidd-Lil-am-The-Epidemic-mixtape.226982.html <—the epidemic - RH

10:22 pm
April 21, 2009


jah_sodier

Veteran

Posts: 426

44

I VOTE FOR TYPHOON

battle record 4-1 BEAT mook mook, ,ajay the kid, j-duce , rozwell and loss against loose cannon. BRIM BlOOd 4MYFAMENT…… SOOWOO YO! MO WADUP, GRIT WADUP, CHOSE WADUP

10:26 pm
April 21, 2009


AJay tha Kidd

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 3381

Jacksonville, FL

45

jah_sodier said:

I VOTE FOR TYPHOON


Mm, too bad I already won

Sorry hater.

http://www.datpiff.com/AJay-tha-Kidd-Lil-am-The-Epidemic-mixtape.226982.html <—the epidemic - RH