I honestly can't sugarcoat this. You need to spend alot more time practicing on photoshop before you even charge anyone for your designs. Just because you finally got your hacked version of CS5 like everyone else, doesn't really qualify you as a professional graphic designer. It takes time and dedication to your craft, because it obviously shows in your final product that you have no love put into your own creations.

 I'm not trying to come at your neck either ma' dude. It would be great for more people to prosper in the art world. But the fact that the game is flooded with everybody making half assed designs, makes it hard for all the people their soul into there work. I've seen alot of designers that make art designs that are easily worth about $500, and they have to compensate to the people that are undercutting them by ridiculous amounts, and only able to make $60 out of it.

 Personally, I have a few friends to where graphic design is paying their light bill. Barely surviving. So take your work more serious man, hopefully I'll see some dope s**t in the future. Stay up.