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C-Cheesy PTSD vs $moke32

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12:50 pm
July 12, 2015


c-beezy

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 661

Georgia

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c-beezy said:

But if you really want to go Track Vs. Track. I will be dropping a Party Type Song next week,


My party song is not done yet because its still in production but it really doesnt matter what i drop! Its gonna be better! lol Listen smoke dont complain about people having biased votes (and dickriding) when you go around talking sh*t to EVERYONE and EVERYTHING….Ive been on shadowville for like 6 months and youre saying i already having dickriders!? NO! Maybe my music just deserves honest feedback and thats what i get….if your music is undeniably good then people will tell you dude, but refusing to listen to criticism (bc your music needs work) is ignorant and people will take your music less and less serious because you argue on why their feedback is wrong. You want serious listeners then be serious with your music. You cant expect to have serious responses when your raps go like this….

(In the traditional slow tempo Smoke342 flow)
Yea you a fucckkkkiinn lame
Ill hit you is yo fuccckkkkin brain
Its a fucckkkin shame
I dont even know my fuccckkkin name

(try to find another filler word then “f*cking”)

Freestyle or not, you have room for improvement. I dont understand why people think just because its a freestyle the song is SO much better…its actually the complete opposite,

“I cant stand lames, yall need to sit down” would actually be one of your better bars too bad i came up with it! and its not even that good. lol

Lastly Smoke realize at the end of the day this is all for fun! Take your music serious but dont take your beefs with people online serious.. atleast i dont. im really just playing witcha dude, you might be a cool dude in real life haha but on some real sh*t your music has room for improvement, thats why people vote against you not because they are riding the other person’s dick

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4:34 pm
July 12, 2015


smoke342

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 981

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That is a matter of opinion and yes it does matter. Its like I see Bdot going around telling every one including myself ur music doesn’t have good playback ability so i listen to his new joint up until that second dude gets on and make a similar comment.

Now if i hadn’t had that experience and just heard the track knowing .nothing of dude my opinion would be different. If i had collabed with him and been on good terms i would be swayed in the opposite direction of liking his drops for the sake that he is a friend and artist I collab with, I have been there and that is the essence of dick riding. But not only was this not the case but his drop is about how he is so great, everyone else sucks, and people who r not cool with him now r out of luck. So i am not exactly giving unbiased feedback no matter how hard i tried.

Now i was the only feedback he got for days…and why is that? And it wasnt until i admitted my bias that the people started listening or at least responding. I really don’t think its all that bad but the type of song on top.of a strained disrespectful relationship thats what came out, and i really cant expect anything different for myself from him.

I have heard your music you said you made for radio that was mostly.cuss words and as I mentioned before shadowville artists r more like astral punching bags to me, where i will release songs i made for people in r/l but make them sound like i made them to insult them so all the feedback i get is similar to what i gave bdot so thats why it can only be taken serious. I cant tell you how many people have left shadowville over the years because of me but a shortlist is KayR, mr 99, Yung c, nasty flake, lucid, jah soldier, john gee, grim demize, droll, lil sam, etc etc.

Now of course i can’t take credit.for.all.these peeps but its like yung c, i.start. beefing and dude is gone only to return once a year. And in real life too, Soi started recording digital to respond to outspoken records, a local group my friend was in who was putting out sneak diss tracks because i.refused to dick ride or be their camera man, manager or investor. My response tracks pretty much destroyed their record label which was thriving until I started dropping.tracks on them.

So i haven’t exactly been making friends here but i really can’t trust anyone left to give unbiased feedback for the reasons listed above and because i am really not friends nor do i.collab with the 5-10 people left, any battle i do.agaisnt one of their friends wont matter if i drop a 1 in 100 dudes r already irritated with me so i have come to the conclusion whats the point.

So i do appreciate your feedback, yes maybe i cuss too much to be commercially viable, and perhaps my freestyles r too basic but go on youtube and listen to the radio, rarely do you hear anything else. My music is 100% what i think sounds good not taking into account lyricism you would really have to read and have inside information to understand, and thats why i feel i have outgrown these forums. No one mentions my exceptional emotional power of delivery or my complex backround layers, but why would they, they r already irritated and can barely sit through one verse.

I did much better when my music was 10x worse quality production in a diverse community like reverberation where i was pressured to make diverse songs because i had 12 year old girls leaving feedback, and i hardly cuss at all in my emotional tracks but there is little point releasing those here as it discredits what i am trying to do which is chaise off these angry haters who r too.good to listen to my sh*t lol.

But i feel like i have matured and this place no longer is productive so maybe i have finally been chaised off myself, by myself. Damn another man down this community cant really take another lol.

https://soundcloud.com/smoke342/fuk-wit-me

6:49 pm
July 12, 2015


cystematic

Posts: 3559

Netherlands

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Smoke, no offense, but you haven’t made one decent track or drop or at least not from what I’ve heard from you so far

It’s not about cussing, we all do that, but…

Yo what’s my f*cking naaaame
In this f*cking gaaaamee
I’m f*cking insaaaane
These kids are f*cking laaame

And you continue that array of filler, one syllable dragged out nonsense throughout. Then you leave the impression that it’s a song, but at the same time turn around and say yes but it was made from freestyled lines put together. Lol so what do you want credit for, for the fact you freestyled or that you made a song? Because if freestyle, the old technical definition is a verse free of any style, not to any particular beat or theme. The more core essential definition including my personal view, would be off the top. Now I believe you are referring to your lines being off the top, right? The thing is off the top means that a beat is put on and you spit whatever comes to your mind and at the end of the session or whenever you decide to stop? THAT is the drop. Once you start cutting out sh*t that was wack as f*ck and start putting in sh*t that was better, it’s no longer an off the top drop, but more so a manipulated fabricated bullsh*t production in which you felt it wasn’t good enough for off the top so you may as well make it a song…but homie if it wasn’t good enough off the top, it would NEVER be good enough for a god damn song LOL. Imho either spit it raw and leave it like that or pick up a pen and write a song, but what you are making now are neither freestyles nor songs…they are just bits n pieces of nothingness created by nobody.

Just my unbiased 2.46 cents. You almost making me think you are related to G Wizard with that delusional talk..Which is interesting, cause I never knew he had a sister.

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