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9:22 am
September 9, 2008
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sblack
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It,s ya Boy SBlack just finished another Track for my ladies on them poles Called Make it Rain off a Hala-X Beat check it out here plus other sick cut’s ive made http://www.myspace.com/sblack812
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Positives-I can tell you do have the ability to construct a good verse lyrically from the content of this track.
Constructive Crits-I can tell ur reading off paper. don’t do that. rehearse a verse till u know it like the back of ur hand. trust me on this one. monotone-yeah.. dont do that either. show some emotion no matter what song ur making. no one is goin to “feel” what you’re saying if you don’t “feel” what u say.
stay grindin man
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5:18 pm
September 9, 2008
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sblack
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Good Look on the feed back cuz, much respect
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6:30 pm
September 9, 2008
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Capo
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ya i agree with states it sounds u gatta put more emotion into your words
what i would do is keep redion your tracks untill they sound right never rush if u feel like u can do better then what u just did delete it and do it again its your song so it should sound the best of your ability ( if i said that right)
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