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Arsonists Lullabye (Remix) FEEDBACK RETURNED

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1:32 pm
October 1, 2016


GREAT1NE

Adept

Posts: 194

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https://soundcloud.com/the-great1ne/arsonists-lullabye-remix

Mind of an exorcist those who stand next to this
As they try to exit this have em screaming exodus
The rapture the hear after be quick to capture
The captor stick your stature and fracture faster
Infatuated by flames and how the veins drain
Fascinated by pain how the sane abstain
Out to attain and rearrange the humane
With the propane contained in an inane domain
Cause foes to cower all of those with power
Appose and be devoured be froze to the hour
Scared of what lays beyond to fear the pantheon
Impaired to what we on till steered to Babylon
Fistful of grenades bring raids to the brigades
To confuse the charade to let the shade cascade
The individuals those feeling overly invincible
Intent to full vengeful and looking for the pins to pull

Those who want war and to know for what for
Those sore to the core Till its blood pored to the floor
Your swords ashore with remains for decor
To claim and restore swore to ignore for ever more
Those destined when aggression grips a weapon
Knock your chest your intestines you’ll be ingesting
First impression to invest in the progression
The infections procession be destined to set in
When remorse confounds and the force compounds
So we move towards the ground till the hordes surround
Life is mixed in vices your vice is that suffices
What concise is the advice is sacrifices

Be out for revenge suspend and I be about to offend
Act out and descend attend so I doubt you contend
To hold you own undertone be shown what is known
Left alone disowned prone and become overthrown
Where words meet wisdom and birds flee the system
When optimism and cynicism becomes symbolism
With few choices were the noise is gets avoided
Exploited destroy his the ploy is heard thru voices


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5:02 pm
October 2, 2016


c-beezy

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 661

Georgia

2

It was cool.. creative. Im not into the sick twisted rap bars like this. Rap mix with the demonic kind of rock. Some like it just not me. But its not bad. Sometimes it seems your focusing too much on the multis and enstead of having meaningful bars, its just a bunch of adjectives that rhyme.

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