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4:49 am
April 3, 2012
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Kalamity
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Ok well finished entry, Feedback will be returned, Video being uploaded but i have the MP3 open
Song: Beginning Of War
Artist: Kalamity D. Menace
Prod. By: Ear 2 The Beat
Kalamity - Beginning Of War (Prod. By Ear 2 The Beat) by kalamity D. menace
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My soul is in the mic, So you can hear my spirit when i speak.
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5:19 am
April 3, 2012
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Ridikarus
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This is fuckin dope fam. Vocals turned up would help perhaps? No complaints on the flow or lyrics or any of that shit. Hook was pretty catchy. Maybe do some other layers around it panned at different areas to make it resonate better but none of that is necessary. Good luck in the contest man. I've got my entry in the works but holding back to make sure its the absolute best I can give.
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6:58 am
April 3, 2012
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Kalamity
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Ridikarus said:
This is fuckin dope fam. Vocals turned up would help perhaps? No complaints on the flow or lyrics or any of that shit. Hook was pretty catchy. Maybe do some other layers around it panned at different areas to make it resonate better but none of that is necessary. Good luck in the contest man. I've got my entry in the works but holding back to make sure its the absolute best I can give.
Thanks, I wish you luck, It took forever to find the proper beat, this went hard with the lyrics, so yeah, tried.. But doesn't matter if i win but the 500$ would be nice to work on studio still needing alot.. I put quite a bit of time into making this one. And goodluck again to you.
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8:25 am
April 3, 2012
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Ridikarus
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Thanks man. If I win the 50,000 cents I'm probably gonna by a nice mic isolater because the room I live in is massive, then I'll probably get really drunk 
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9:57 am
April 3, 2012
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WarLock
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I'm sorry but the first verse and the hook sound forced as fuck, the second verse for the most part was dope but some of the pauses detracted from the verse. I like the concept but not the song itself. No offense Kalamity but that hook is horrible imo
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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3:31 pm
April 3, 2012
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Kalamity
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WarLock said:
I'm sorry but the first verse and the hook sound forced as fuck, the second verse for the most part was dope but some of the pauses detracted from the verse. I like the concept but not the song itself. No offense Kalamity but that hook is horrible imo
Eh doesn't matter, your the first person to give a bad oppinion about my music.. but thanks for the feedback.
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4:24 pm
April 3, 2012
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WarLock
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It may seriously be me, I'm not hating this is just what I felt when I listened to it. I went through the rest of your soundcloud and the others sound pretty good. This one just doesn't capture me
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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7:38 pm
April 3, 2012
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Kalamity
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My soul is in the mic, So you can hear my spirit when i speak.
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2:26 am
April 4, 2012
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Kalamity
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My soul is in the mic, So you can hear my spirit when i speak.
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12:18 am
April 5, 2012
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Kalamity
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My soul is in the mic, So you can hear my spirit when i speak.
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