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Bored thought I’d spit a few lines. At 7 in the mourning O_O

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7:38 am
May 18, 2008


swiff dollaz

Disciple

Posts: 11

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(Did this at 6 in the mourning it’s prolly gonna suck lol. Let me know what you think.)

 

You want respect in this world homie u gotta earn it

You dont know the game better learn it, now either sink or float

C4 to ya deck an I sink ya boat, Drown or swim

You hate people like me for a reason, cause every one tell ya you’ll never be like him

You sit to da side an hide think i cant touch you, but dawg its open season

Its da haters who say my styles an abomination

But u just mad, cause you know i could bomb-ya-nation

You struggle come up wit a line, ya face beat red like u had cronic constipation

An da street still talks about how I beat you so bad that ya bleed from your ass

You thought u had colorectal cancer, cause you popped a blood bubble every time ya passed some gass

Now they laugh at you and they rightfully should

Your a f**king disgrace, you bring shame to da hood

You still got death threats for me, an I wish you would

But the truth is kid that wish you could

That hard fact is that you’re just no good

I got you in da palm of my hand, and when i grip it u crumble like rotten wood

Now you neva gonna forget my name

Swiff D, Da Sickest Dragon an he spits a f**kin flame

Homie I’m da structure to da f**kin game

Now sit da f**k down, I brought about your shame

You couldn’t hold a candle to my fame

Now ima continue to flow, an u continue to go an be a lame

Cause its a hard life homie an s**t will not change, it remains the same

Paint da X on ya an dot ur forehead, sit u upside down in a broken frame

 

(Wow…. that sucks lmao remind me to never try that at 7 in the mourning again.)

Swiff D aka Da Sickest Dragon


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10:47 am
May 18, 2008


rube

Adept

Posts: 176

Brooklyn

2

"Paint da X on ya an dot ur forehead, sit u upside down in a broken frame"

Was probably your best line, but the wording on how you wrote it was weak. Everything else was weak, really basic and at times the punchlines were worst than the build up bars.

Not trying to play you, keep doing your thing man. You probably were half asleep lol. It’s 10 PM here I just woke up and doing the same thing.

3:03 pm
May 18, 2008


swiff dollaz

Disciple

Posts: 11

3

Yea tell me about it I just read an I’m like what da f**k was I thinking lmao. I just killed my own rep by myself lmao. Damn… sad s**t lol.

Swiff D aka Da Sickest Dragon

6:20 am
May 27, 2008


chill-ez

Journeyman

Posts: 64

4

You dont know the game better learn it, now either sink or float C4 to ya deck an I sink ya boat

i liked that man flows good

keep it up

making my defense immense with even less expence that you can spend………….