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7:25 pm
June 20, 2012
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themessage
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Messed up a little bit on the mxing (still getting a hang of it) But listen to the lyrics I think It's dope.
Hook isn't how I wanted and is a little sketchy, all around I'd like drawn out feedback from this one.
Thanks!
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7:34 pm
June 20, 2012
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onestophiphop
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i think the beat is loud, the vocals are way too loud, if you get a moment check out the new beat simple life in the producers corner fam, i would like to get on this track tho.
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2:43 am
June 21, 2012
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d-method
Shadowvillian
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Yeah i think turn the vocals down a lil. the track didnt turn out as bad as you made it out to be. i like the concept the flow was sick, lyrically you always pretty sick. i guess the hook should be a lil more “up lifting” compared to the verses, it needs more diversity so that its not the same sound the whole way through.
I like it though good job man.
RTF?
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..joes-track
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3:01 pm
June 22, 2012
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themessage
Shadowvillian
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d-method said:
Yeah i think turn the vocals down a lil. the track didnt turn out as bad as you made it out to be. i like the concept the flow was sick, lyrically you always pretty sick. i guess the hook should be a lil more “up lifting” compared to the verses, it needs more diversity so that its not the same sound the whole way through.
I like it though good job man.
RTF?
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..joes-track
Thanks guys, I get what you're saying. I'ma fix the loumes and make it better.
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11:36 am
June 23, 2012
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smoke342
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Yo this is cool. I like your style on this and glad to see you sticking it to the llati's.
Good work.
Rtf?
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..ut#p341245
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