I thought it was ok. I loved the first part of the hook, but the last half where you/dude shifted the tuning of yours/his voice, kind of threw it off, n didnt even up with the beat as well.
You’ve got flow for real. You remind me of Reef the Lost Cauze/Papoose. Your delieveries sub-par. At times through the song you sounded bored, which is why I’d tell you to work on your energy infront of the mic. Also, some people might like your lyrical game, but I think you should of came with something other then punchlines. I mean, if it was a punchline type of battle song, ok, I’d get it, but this was more of a feel good joint, n should of upped your lyrical game more.
So I mean, off that good ol scale, I’d give you a 7.2/10. Good works.