Gotta love people that take the time out to start an account just to drop a link.  I think the track is pretty good man, to be honest with you I think your voice isn’t really recognizable.  You sound like a lot of other artists (none mainstream).  Some people have the easy road of having a "Cool", recognizable voice.  With that said, I would like to tell you that my thoughts are, you need to make your lyrics and style more recognizable to develop an even better following.  Keep grinding, and spend a little more time on your next track to make it help you separate from the rest.  good luck man