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4:01 pm
June 25, 2012
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Concept
Master Shadowvillian
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Rob Grounds acting/talking
my gf female vocals in hook.
BOOM haven't even released it yet besides right here.
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4:21 pm
June 25, 2012
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tl2
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Not bad. Your girlfriend has a nice voice, she should be more confident when she sings.
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7:00 pm
June 25, 2012
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slickwilkey3
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I agree with TL on the hook, she would sound so more better with she sung like she knew the words. (She sound like she thinking about them too much). As far as your verses….flow still a bit off to me…sounds a bit choppy but an improvment over past work. Decent track…I would work on it more but I release it if it were my track.
Slicka
http://www.soundcloud.com/slicka-1
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2:37 am
June 26, 2012
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Mr. Flako
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mix sounds good, lyrics sounded pretty good also. flow sounded off here and there throughout the song def. rushing too many words in the bars, choppy would be the word. other than that the theme was coo and i agree ur girl sounds like she has mad potential, get her on more shit to push that voice out. ive heard a couple tracks from u in the past and this sounds like an improvement so props
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12:46 pm
June 26, 2012
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KoLyric
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This was okay. Lyrics were cool, but the flow stumbled numerous times and was choppy. The chorus was decent, but I agree with Tyler's notion about confidence.
Overall I didn't like this that much. Nonetheless, keep practicing and perfecting the craft.
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ANATOMY OF MASTERPIECE: http://kolyric.bandcamp.com/album/anatomy-of-masterpiece
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6:34 pm
June 26, 2012
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UNDEFEATED
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KoLyric said:
This was okay. Lyrics were cool, but the flow stumbled numerous times and was choppy. The chorus was decent, but I agree with Tyler's notion about confidence.
Overall I didn't like this that much. Nonetheless, keep practicing and perfecting the craft.
Yup
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9:48 pm
June 26, 2012
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alexxx keller
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It's a strange dichotomy.
A “Fuck the radio” (mainstream) song is widely accepted in the underground, but I wonder if a “fuck the underground” song would be accepted in the mainstream? Hmm.
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“After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.”
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6:00 pm
June 27, 2012
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Master Shadowvillian
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probably not lol I dunno ^ ^
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5:15 pm
July 5, 2012
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Master Shadowvillian
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