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Deason - Letter To My Unborn Child

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10:44 am
July 3, 2012


Deason

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Posts: 389

Clarksville, TN

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http://www.reverbnation.com/op…..g/13599544

I did this track on Father's Day and got alot of love on Facebook, but I figured I'd drop it here for some actual feedback!  It's short and sweet!  But enjoy, and drop links so I can return the favor!

http://www.datpiff.com/Deason-The-931307-Connect-mixtape.351302.html


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4:50 pm
July 3, 2012


Mr. Flako

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Posts: 499

EAST SUNNYSIDE AZ

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always enjoyed the quality of ur tracks bro. Flow was on point and smooth thru the whole track, lyrics were deep as hell can tell u mean what u write, That intro part fit the song perfectly. Only thing i can say is the singing part of the hook sounded off pitch, but then again sounds like its meant like that, like i can picture someone sittin there holdin a bottle of tequila faded n depressed singin that lol. Overall good song thx for sendin me thru

http://www.reverbnation.com/azflako

12:42 pm
July 4, 2012


Deason

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Posts: 389

Clarksville, TN

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Thanks homie.  And yea I was twisted when I recorded this track.  LOL had me all extra sentimental!

Ups

http://www.datpiff.com/Deason-The-931307-Connect-mixtape.351302.html

5:18 pm
July 4, 2012


KayR

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Posts: 4086

Winnipeg

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Damn man. That's some heavy shit. This is solid. I think your flow on the verses wasn't to bad, not my favorite but pretty solid. I agree with Flako about the singing accept I don't think it works being off key. Aside from that this thing is solid.

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3:12 pm
July 5, 2012


Deason

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Posts: 389

Clarksville, TN

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Thanks man!

Ups

http://www.datpiff.com/Deason-The-931307-Connect-mixtape.351302.html