Wasn’t feeling this man
Beat first off ain’t my type of sh*t necessarily
The hook was like whatever, mix wise and especially lyrically
First verse - Main point of improvement would be the mix I’d say. Still sounding very raw/low quality. Muffled sound overall. Flow was ok, but basic. Delivery meh came of as dude was bored as sh*t lol
Verse two - Hmm, again the mix needs work. Serious amount of sibilance present, but definitely a lot better than first verse. The delivery was decent, way more umphh than the first cat, good enough energy overall. Not feeling the flow all the way through, it was cool, but seemed forced and rushed on many parts. Speech became slurred because of that I think.
Both ya’ll lyrics are whatever honestly.
Overall it’s ok, definitely not my type of track, but just keeping it real.