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8:03 pm
June 18, 2012
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thisisrek
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A Song i did recently, I dont actually know the guy featuring on it,
and he wasnt my first choice, but Let me know what you think
i will return feed if u drop a link
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8:49 pm
June 18, 2012
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KoLyric
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Dope flow. Concept was cool, I liked the song title.
Heartfelt.
rtf? http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..ne-and-off
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ANATOMY OF MASTERPIECE: http://kolyric.bandcamp.com/album/anatomy-of-masterpiece
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12:36 am
June 19, 2012
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slickwilkey3
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I wasn't a fan on the delivery on this one…it started off tight but then there were lines where u tried to fit in too many words and then lines where u didn't have enough words so u had a longer pause. Great concept and lyrics though. Why did u release a track with a feature that wasn't ur first choice?? U could always try to get someone else or fill it in urself imo
Slicka
http://www.soundcloud.com/slicka-1
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1:20 am
June 19, 2012
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thisisrek
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@Slickwilkey i dont hate the guy on the feature, and i feel it brings the track full circle, he just wasnt my first choice, and i hear you on the longer pause its bothered me since i first recorded this track, but i still like the recordings so i kept em,
thanks for the feed
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7:38 pm
June 19, 2012
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thisisrek
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9:06 pm
June 19, 2012
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tl2
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I like this a lot. It reminds me of Dizzy Wright. i like the little stutter effects, and the lyrics are very poetic. RTF
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youtube.com/mrtylerleachmusic
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12:20 am
June 20, 2012
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KayR
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Great beat, Dansonn got it. First verse has got some solid lyrics and the flow is pretty on point. The delivery could use more amped up emotion. The end of the verse seems to get it more. “Ghost of kid” is a rushed portion that I don't like. Same with “when it got…hectic”. The second verse guy ain't bad, though he's not that solid. The third verse is similar, although the flow is slightly worse because it slips at points.
Not bad man.
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6:46 am
June 20, 2012
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onestophiphop
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i like this, always a fan of the real talk tracks, the mix is pretty good, lyrics were dope, check me out when u get a moment http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..uitar-beat
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12:51 pm
June 20, 2012
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thisisrek
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@kayr thanks for the feed
@onestop thanks and i will asap
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2:22 pm
June 23, 2012
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dabigyp
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very dope, im a huge fan of the beat
i wasnt really feelin the second verse though, that little bit at the end of it wasnt very solid
you got a dope ass flow, you gotta work on them rolls though
over all good shit man, keep it up
rtf - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v…..SQFD23RjqA
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