vocals got a little hot in some places, maybe stay a little further away from your mic and use software to raise the volume?
i think you’d benefit from some multis or more complex rhymes or maybe just develop the concept. the hook was a perfect example of the simple rhyme scheme, some multis would have made it a lot better.
i think it boils down to this - you crank out songs like crazy, i think if you worked longer on each song youd come out with some much nastier shit. all that being said, i listened to the whole thing and can tell you’ve got ability, just maybe some equipment issues and a little impatience. keep grindin