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11:19 pm
March 27, 2012
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JokR
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The Eastcoast Demon | Messyhead
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10:01 pm
March 28, 2012
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evanlopez87
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I thought it was dope man. your voice matches your delivery & style of flow.. I thought first verse delivery was best & ended best.. seemed like end of second verse last bar ended uncomfortably. and ending of 3rd verse last bar needed more emphasis as and ending know what I mean. like.. we as the PEOPLE should have known better more emotion kind of.. I thought the content over all was dope like what your talking about and you did it in a cool way. felt like though all 3 verses could have been interchangable instead of a build conflict conclusion style between all 3 verses like wrapping it up intro/climax struggle/ conclusion
you talked about a lot of big things though. would have been easier had I had lyrics to read at same time though. anyway. really liked it man I will subscribe on youtube! keep it coming!
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6GN7g2utpfU,
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11:12 pm
March 28, 2012
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JokR
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Post edited 11:29 pm - March 28, 2012 by JokR
Sweet many thanks for the feedback. Helps a lot and yeah I actually agree. I heard some of what you said after I released it. I enjoy having 'archives' to look back on but I'll probably clean this up before I release it on the mixtape.
Will definitely take everything you said in to consideration, thanks cousin.
Update: I added lyrics in the description of the video
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4:54 am
March 30, 2012
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onestophiphop
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this is dope as fuck bro, your lyrics here are nice as fuck, your quality is good,, the beat is dope as fuck Solid track man, Return the feed please http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..d-returned
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Buy and Sell Beats and Tracks online with no monthly fees @ www.onestophiphop.net
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9:28 pm
March 30, 2012
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JokR
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Thanks man for the feedback, much appreciated. I returned it
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10:42 am
March 31, 2012
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moespitsick
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Light It Up coming soon!!!
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