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1:04 pm
June 11, 2012
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Lucid
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Lucid - Hahaha! Produced by p!!kk. He doesnt know I used the beat and he'll probably make an age joke about it but its alllllll goood. Tell me what you think. The better the feedback you give me the better and more constructing mine will be. Drop your link. FOOLS.
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1:06 pm
June 11, 2012
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Lucid
Shadowvillian
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1:42 pm
June 11, 2012
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matness
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I though it was cool. You lyrics are nice, but i think you use too many basic rhymes. Your flow is on point and somehow I didn't get bored even tho you didn't switch the flow up or nothing.
rtf:http://www.shadowville.com/board/emcees-corner/ones-productions-cypher-entry-feed-returned
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5:27 pm
June 11, 2012
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tl2
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It's crazy how much you've improved in the year and a half since I've been here. I just have three suggestions:
1. When you mix, your vocals are usually a lot louder than the beat (like on this track and on Swag) so try to even them out next time and it'll sound better.
2. You don't use many multi-syllable rhyme schemes, just basic single-syllable ones.
3. You don't feature me enough.
Swag.
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youtube.com/mrtylerleachmusic
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6:39 pm
June 11, 2012
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matic187
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What the hell was that? Come on now be serious!!!!!!
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SHADOWVILLE’S MOST HATED RAPPER-”YOUNG MATIC”
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6:42 pm
June 11, 2012
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Lucid
Shadowvillian
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matic187 said:
What the hell was that? Come on now be serious!!!!!!
the sound your mother makes when we use the anal beads. Teha. cheers bro.
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6:48 pm
June 11, 2012
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matic187
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Wow I didnt know you like to use anal beads……..I guess Shadowville has GAY rappers!!!!!
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SHADOWVILLE’S MOST HATED RAPPER-”YOUNG MATIC”
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2:43 pm
June 12, 2012
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Lucid
Shadowvillian
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3:58 pm
June 12, 2012
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Elivated
Legendary Shadowvillian
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matic187 said:
What the hell was that? Come on now be serious!!!!!!
“chain shine like a rainbow” fuck outta here
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10:09 pm
June 12, 2012
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d-method
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why you had too make a video….haha i dont know.
Track wise, quality on point, creative with the sound effects.
lyrical wise i think you got your own style. you always got a good flow rather than crazy punches but still got lines.. if that makes sense?
why did you stop rapping at the end???
p!!kk, good beat
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