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4:23 am
July 4, 2009
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AlexKKKeller
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I tried a new method of recording to try and make the quality better, tell me if it's better/worse/no different from the other song:
http://www.myspace.com/alexxxkeller
Feedback would be appreciated, thanks.
PS: Pikk, I tried to go for that “in your face” delivery you were talking about, let me know how accurate I was, if at all.
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isellspacesuits (5:37:39 PM): uh…all 57 kids…don’t know what immature means…they all believe in god..and uh…theyre all retarded spics.
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7:21 am
July 4, 2009
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p.I.k.k.
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New delievery: Awesome.
You came harder this time around, your voice sounds alot more comfortable. As for the flow, you need to synch it better with the beat. I think it's just the beat (doesnt seem like one you'd rap to), but your flow was off most of the song. The lyricism is great. You have the potential to make music I just love to listen to, reminds me alot of DZK/Tech N9ne. The hook was weak, for the most part. Was also off on the flow, which threw off my ears for a 2nd, but I liked the idea..
The quality seems alot better then the last one, recording wise. I still think a better compressor effect on the vocals would give it more umph, also some pre-amping, but workin with what u got, I get that, n it's pretty good.
Overall: Pretty dope. Just needs more mixing and mastering. 8.3/10.
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8:49 am
July 4, 2009
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Diogenes
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fook yeah. dope shit. I didn't think the flow was off on the verses. It sounded more like intentionally straying from the beat to me. The hook needs some work though. Flow kinda reminded me of Necro haha, I don't know if you even listen to him though.
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http://www.myspace.com/diogenesofdesmoines
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 damn alex still good shit just gotta get the quality up alittle more and ull be perfect. good stuff gets insane on the second verse lol. keep it up
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www.myspace.com/chevellejamesmusic
“Hi its vince with slap chop”
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11:38 am
July 4, 2009
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KoLyric
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Introducing a presentable, sentimental, sentinel. Viewing the mental skeptical of believing in god OR the devil.
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1:53 pm
July 4, 2009
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Mr. AL
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damn Alex! This is ill as fuck…god DAMN
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That shit was real. Work on that quality and get some better beats. I'm impressed.
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http://www.myspace.com/joshlynn100
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5:04 pm
July 4, 2009
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Sti-G
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I luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv that flow.
but indeed terrible quality, a flow like that's worth a better mic man. go to a studio or buy/steal/lend a helluva mic, put the flow you got on beat, make sure you got someone fixing some hot hooks for ya or put some more work in your chorusses.
RESULT = a hot emcee
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www.myspace.com/stijngovaerts
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8:13 pm
July 4, 2009
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AlexKKKeller
Master Shadowvillian
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Thanks for the feed ya'll, I appreciate it.
And you're right Pikk, it isn't a beat I'd normally spit on ool, but I just wanted to test the new recording method.
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isellspacesuits (5:37:39 PM): uh…all 57 kids…don’t know what immature means…they all believe in god..and uh…theyre all retarded spics.
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yeah i agree your quality is bad but the lyrics are killa
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We are not the same, I’m underground to the root// While you talk about shit that you never could loot//
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