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Mock-C 50k Contest Entry (Let Go)

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9:43 am
March 28, 2012


ッMock-Cッ

Shadowvillian

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Home Town Columbus.Ohio

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feed?

The story behind this song,

Part of it is about a lost love another is about my good friend Colten who died recently..

This song means alot to me

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10:36 am
March 28, 2012


djrewind

Fresh Meat

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you say you “just want someone to listen” but who wants to hear some suicidal lyrics with a whack flow. see that right there? thats an honest opinion. you get one life, there is a God, and there is heaven to hope for after. what the fuck are you contemplating giving up your life for?

your chorus is all pastence but it sounds like the you NOW is stupid.

sucks this is the kind of talent thats going to be entered into the competition…

ps. suicide confirms your soul to be damned its the worst sin you could commit, if you even believe in anything.

10:52 am
March 28, 2012


ッMock-Cッ

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1470

Home Town Columbus.Ohio

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The chorus is in the form of my friend who overdosed and killed himself. 

Then me sayin i love him and I cant believe hes gone.

The first verse is of me tryin to talk about the first thing i lost and he lost before he died, a love

The second is me tryin to find a way to talk to him.

To shed some light on your misquieded opinion


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10:05 pm
March 28, 2012


ッMock-Cッ

Shadowvillian

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Home Town Columbus.Ohio

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bump

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4:32 am
March 29, 2012


Ridikarus

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 2840

Oregon/United Kingdom

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djrewind said:

you say you “just want someone to listen” but who wants to hear some suicidal lyrics with a whack flow. see that right there? thats an honest opinion. you get one life, there is a God, and there is heaven to hope for after. what the fuck are you contemplating giving up your life for?

your chorus is all pastence but it sounds like the you NOW is stupid.

sucks this is the kind of talent thats going to be entered into the competition…

ps. suicide confirms your soul to be damned its the worst sin you could commit, if you even believe in anything.


Christians are retards. Laugh

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6:42 am
March 29, 2012


Ridikarus

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 2840

Oregon/United Kingdom

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Alright Mock so I'm going to be honest. I wasn't really feeling this EXCEPT for the lyrics were meaningful and I can tell you put a lot of time and energy into them. I'm not trying to be a dick here but I would suggest you either learn to sing properly or get someone else to do it lol. The flow was ok but kind of slow adn repetitive. I would say redo it and change it up if you wanna win fam.

Good effort tho. Fuck this rewind dude.

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11:33 am
March 29, 2012


ッMock-Cッ

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1470

Home Town Columbus.Ohio

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Thanks ridik i didnt make this song FOR the contest but while I was almost done with it I figured I'd enter it since its my newest song and i just seen the add yesterday.

as for the singing it sounded good unmixed but I tried inseverals way of mixing and it made it sound off because I multilayered the hook so i might jus remake the hook or have him mix it for me lol


If you got anything you want my feed on I'll gladly do so


I love your avatar btw The Last Unicorn was my favorite movie when i was little

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11:47 am
March 29, 2012


rymeatic

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honestly the chorus sounds like something dok holmes would do 

T-R-A-K

5:43 am
March 30, 2012


Ridikarus

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 2840

Oregon/United Kingdom

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No doubt it was a dope film! Thanks for recognizing the Red Bull, and not calling it Satan lol. Did you ever watch Flight of Dragons as well? I think its by the same company/director but i cant remember offhand. They dont make classic shit like this anymore:

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5:45 am
March 30, 2012


Ridikarus

Master Shadowvillian

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Oregon/United Kingdom

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And yeah homie, if you could like my mixtape on FB and DL it and tell me what you think I would really appreciate it man. Good luck on the contest anyway. Even if its got its low points its all around well done original material.

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