I’ve never posted on the forum, been a member for awhile though, listen to the beats alot, love em, and i write songs to em sometimes, i get mixed reviews from friends though, I was wantin some feedback about some verses I’ve wrote, thanks!
I don’t represent nothin, but I do present somethin
I’m just a lil off then the rest of em
I’m little more screwed up, I come all juiced up
Your styles all used up, It’s used more than a bruised cunt
And don’t take me lightly, or turn your back blindly
Cause I just might be, inclined to make you fight me
Motherf**ker I’ll come up from behind ya
And slit you down the back and make you a f**kin vagina
You just got f**ked, I’ll eat you alive like pot luck
How’s your mom? Now I know where to go to get my cock sucked
I heard your birth was 3 weeks late
They had to remove all the guys from between her legs
I also heard that you took a crap backwards
Your last song was the s**t that you rapped afterwards
Your last track was abstract straight from your f**king asscrack
Do us all a favor and dont rap back
So what’s the point of even trying to insult me?
You can’t do it, every line you write is faulty
It appalls me, I walk you through beats like a doggy
It makes you mad cause you know you’ll never stop me
You try to top me with every song your dropping
But you’ve never got me, so stop beef and get off me
Keep going the way your going and its gonna get awefully
Nasty real quick and end with you in a coffin
Now I don’t mean to be rude, but dude
When you talk s**t I’ll stuff you with fists like your chewin dog food
Now don’t get me wrong I love to battle
I love to rattle your cage, and listen to you babble
The same old s**t, and acting like it really matters
But you suck so bad you just help me finish you faster
Sit back and witness this master, diminish this rapper
To an tremendous disaster. I’m done b*tch I’ll finish you after
Thats some recent stuff i wrote i few nights ago, i have recorded songs from awhile ago, got em saved on CD’s but i just have a s**tty computer microphone lol, so the sound quality of my voice sucks.
feedback appreciated, tell it like it is.