Im new and hungry to this rap communty/

Haters about to get washed up like dirty laundry/

check the name-tag signed is sinister/

but I clean up so quick im in there like a visitor/

I got poison in my spit glad like a viper/

the sting will rash up the ass if i bite cha/

Im hearin alotta rappers in here nice to meet cha/

but the rest fall in the category of a poser/

bout to pull it tight on the mic like a panty hose-a/

blow it up; ignite like a terror plot; thought i warned ya/

now feel the heat like an inferno but only warmer/

step on ya sneakers when i sneak out them corners/

I use the mic as a surgical tool to operate on ya/

the pool of blood evaperates in my respitory adima/

mama mia…more bodies gettin toss thn a pizza at a pizzaria/

step to the boss i'll have that back breakin like i weighed in at a million/

you must be hungry for an ass beatin' cause you still have alot of work to do, before you battle anyone work on it some more, but i like that more bodies gettin toss than a pizza at a pizzaria thing lol but keep workin you will get better

lol oh ok, but yes work on wordplay, though you had some punchlines in there

lol