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2:45 pm
October 4, 2012
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robby889
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http://soundcloud.com/robby888…..pen-collab
And if you do choose to be in this song… Start your verse
at 2:25 where the beat changes or 2:32 where it hits…
and end right around
4:11-4:20..
send me regular and accapella copy to
Robby2685@yahoo.com
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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4:43 pm
October 4, 2012
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robby889
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this link works,, thats why I reposted it..
Why the hell does no one want to collab right now??? haha damnn
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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your flow’s a little slow and choppy man, nice beat tho, your voice doesn’t quite mesh well maybe a volume issue. i feel like you could say a lot more in the bars you got. take it positive.
return me some love or hate: http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..k-returned
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6:35 pm
October 4, 2012
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robby889
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Well I wasnt really lookin for feedback,, but ok, I’ll check yurs out.
I’m really lookin for someone to hop on this..
and btw,, I intended my verse to be like that..
the way I could of fit more ino the bars. I rapped
slow on this on purpose..
and I really disagree on how my voice didnt mesh well,,
volume issue or something.. haha cause I have had bad
flow songs,, but I thought this one was really mellow, and
straight forward or something.. hahah but thanks for the feedback!
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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8:30 am
October 16, 2012
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robby889
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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3:19 am
October 18, 2012
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serena-alese
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robby889 said:
Well I wasnt really lookin for feedback,, but ok, I’ll check yurs out.
I’m really lookin for someone to hop on this..
and btw,, I intended my verse to be like that..
the way I could of fit more ino the bars. I rapped
slow on this on purpose..
and I really disagree on how my voice didnt mesh well,,
volume issue or something.. haha cause I have had bad
flow songs,, but I thought this one was really mellow, and
straight forward or something.. hahah but thanks for the feedback!
Your voice reminded me of Wayne. I thought it was pretty good. Just need to work a bit more on delivery is all. I’m not one to talk because that’s my issue too, but still. You’ve got the voice, just needs some conditioning.
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-AnimeniaK | Houston Jinchuriki | tjay501.net
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6:45 am
October 18, 2012
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robby889
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Post edited 8:32 am - October 18, 2012 by robby889
thank you for that!
Yeah I understand the whole
conditioning part. I have got like 10 times better
since from my 1st mixtape to my 3rd, so I am
only getting better.. But thats good to hear,,
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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10:06 am
October 18, 2012
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youngblood937
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If ya want i’ll throw a verse up?
if ya wanna check my stuff first.
http://www.reverbnation.com/dylnmusic
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Music is my Life, My Passion, I don’t let the lames get to me. Hate is my Motivation -D.Y.L.N.
Links:
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www.facebook.com/dylnmusic
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10:36 am
October 18, 2012
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robby889
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Go ahead and put one down,,
I have a few that already did there’s
but go ahead.
If I dont make yurs the final version,
you can still have yur version though
with my verse in it to have.
but if you do a verse, send it back so
I can check it out.
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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3:02 pm
October 18, 2012
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Rasher T
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If you got autotune on turn it off…. also… you should try adding more emotion to your lyrics. it doesnt sound like you are committed to them. like you know them. beats nice tho.
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So Impressive. http://soundcloud.com/Rashert
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