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10:47 pm
February 4, 2008


jix

Disciple

Posts: 15

1

defintion of endin speculation
ceasin suspicion with rap education
no more rift raft er debatin
just one open n closed statement
of lyrical defacement u wan have a placement
let me show u how to make it
not beat round the bush n fake it
u gotta put in werk to replace time in the dirt
we aint children get out the sand box b4 i put u below the earth
see u round werk meanin muggin when i call u out u be buggin
sayin we aint have a prob but then u text me later all thuggin
which is it ur deceving its not me
cuz i see a b*tch to the worst degree
least when u wanted to step
it woulda left u with defeated respect
now u need to watch ur mouth b4 ur ass get checked
n i aint talkin hockey
n trust me boy aint boy u call gun stop me
heard it all n seen even worse
the scar n my shoulder wasnt from birth
so i got the threshold to weather a beaten
so which is it a sorry or cease of speakin ?
cuz me being with your women is something u need to get used ta
otherwise you lookin a damn bleak future


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11:44 pm
February 4, 2008


king cobra

Posts: 2754

2

nice but you have to work on your structure…try to make your lines all the same length …..that’s a simple way to fix your structure.