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http://soundcloud.com/guerilla…..at-the-sky
Basically the goal was to make a chill song with random lyrics to smoke to… let me know what you think
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Post edited 9:21 am - October 17, 2012 by Guerilla Gorilla
Will return feedback just drop a link
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1:07 pm
October 17, 2012
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Rasher T
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It is Chill. i could see myself smoking a few to this… Good Work. Feelin the hook and lyrics, maybe some echos, faint echos could of been added to make it more chill but its 8/10
Beat is chill too.
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So Impressive. http://soundcloud.com/Rashert
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Post edited 3:08 pm - October 17, 2012 by Guerilla Gorilla
Rasher T said:
It is Chill. i could see myself smoking a few to this… Good Work. Feelin the hook and lyrics, maybe some echos, faint echos could of been added to make it more chill but its 8/10
Beat is chill too.
Thanks man. Here’s an attempt to embed:
Staring with Love at the Sky by Guerilla Gorilla
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no player 
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5:51 pm
October 18, 2012
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robby889
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nice hook..
flow was okay
but lyrics were nicer than anything on this..
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Living That Life is an escape from reality. Actually you want everything back from when life was Innocent. Half of Your own Life is Distant.
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7:10 pm
October 18, 2012
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d-method
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I think the vocals need to be mixed with the beat more, they kinda like 2 layers if you know what i mean? just so they sound smoother and the adlibs need to be tighter they a bit loose and it makes it hard to hear some things.
saying that rhyme scheme is pretty different i think with more emotion and more mic presence it couldve been more effective even if a tracks chilled you can out emotion in it.hook was ok ntn like wow but honestly this track has potential because ive heard some of the other stuff youve done so the only thing id recommend is just trying to put in that emotion but keep it all up man
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D-Method - My City Ft. Jah Soldier/Awall, eM Theory & Exurt coming soon!!
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robby889 said:
nice hook..
flow was okay
but lyrics were nicer than anything on this..
tend to agree with you. thanks for the feedback.
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d-method said:
I think the vocals need to be mixed with the beat more, they kinda like 2 layers if you know what i mean? just so they sound smoother and the adlibs need to be tighter they a bit loose and it makes it hard to hear some things.
saying that rhyme scheme is pretty different i think with more emotion and more mic presence it couldve been more effective even if a tracks chilled you can out emotion in it.hook was ok ntn like wow but honestly this track has potential because ive heard some of the other stuff youve done so the only thing id recommend is just trying to put in that emotion but keep it all up man
thanks for putting the time in to all those thoughts my man, damn useful and appreciate it
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