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OneS Productions Cypher Entry (feed returned)

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9:02 am
June 9, 2012


matness

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This is my entry to the cypher.
As it says in the video it's just for practice, but tell me what you think anyway.
Leave a link and I'll return the feedback.

 


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9:53 am
June 9, 2012


☆TRUSS-C!TY☆

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Post edited 9:54 am - June 9, 2012 by ☆TRUSS-C!TY☆


Beat volume wise seemed low, lyrics not bad, delivery needs a lil work, nice concept, keep at it brotha, keep practicing!


RTF please.

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10:25 am
June 9, 2012


matness

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�TRUSS-C!TY� said:

Post edited 9:54 am - June 9, 2012 by ☆TRUSS-C!TY☆


Beat volume wise seemed low, lyrics not bad, delivery needs a lil work, nice concept, keep at it brotha, keep practicing!


RTF please.

http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..-a-cold-16

http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..u-grateful



Thanks dude

5:01 pm
June 9, 2012


matness

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bump

4:43 am
June 10, 2012


matness

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^^

5:10 am
June 11, 2012


matness

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c'mon now!

7:07 pm
June 11, 2012


onestophiphop

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beats ill, vocal mix could use work, unless it was live, lyrics are ok, i would say work on your delivery and u got it bro

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8:33 am
June 12, 2012


matness

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Posts: 1165

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onestophiphop said:

beats ill, vocal mix could use work, unless it was live, lyrics are ok, i would say work on your delivery and u got it bro


Yeah I'm just starting to learn how to mix, thanks for the feedback!

5:00 pm
June 14, 2012


micka

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Returning the feed.

This was cool man, nice flow & delivery.

Just work on spicin up those vocals & of course, the mix.

Keep it up fam.


Micka Mex

6:18 pm
June 14, 2012


matness

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Posts: 1165

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micka said:

Returning the feed.

This was cool man, nice flow & delivery.

Just work on spicin up those vocals & of course, the mix.

Keep it up fam.


Micka Mex


Thanks man.