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OneS Productions Cypher Entry (feed returned)

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10:43 pm
June 16, 2012


d-method

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Posts: 1142

The Bay, South Africa

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Yeah i think the vocals were a lil high compared to the beat, i agree with one i think you just goda get that delivery a lil more and itl be alot better


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1:09 am
June 17, 2012


ADP

Disciple

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Post edited 1:09 am - June 17, 2012 by ADP


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11:49 am
June 17, 2012


KayR

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4109

Winnipeg

13

The mixing obviously could use an improvement. Your voice makes things a little hard to hear things every now and then but it's not to bad. The lyrics seem like their on point, the flow is a little messy and could use a bit of cleaning up. But it's not bad, just keep on practising.

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1:00 pm
June 17, 2012


matness

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Posts: 1165

14

Thanks y'all for peeping and the feedback.