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10:43 pm June 16, 2012
| d-method
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Yeah i think the vocals were a lil high compared to the beat, i agree with one i think you just goda get that delivery a lil more and itl be alot better
RTF?
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..joes-track
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1:09 am June 17, 2012
| ADP
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Post edited 1:09 am - June 17, 2012 by ADP
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11:49 am June 17, 2012
| KayR
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The mixing obviously could use an improvement. Your voice makes things a little hard to hear things every now and then but it's not to bad. The lyrics seem like their on point, the flow is a little messy and could use a bit of cleaning up. But it's not bad, just keep on practising.
Return the feedback:
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..f-produced
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1:00 pm June 17, 2012
| matness
Shadowvillian
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Thanks y'all for peeping and the feedback.
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