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7:57 pm April 2, 2012
| unknowncrypt
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Not quite done yet, but definitely putting work in. Hopefully I will be posting stuff here more often and becoming part of the community. As a sort of welcome to myself here is something I wrote today, and decided to take a quick recording. I like to see rappers in their raw environment so that's why I chose this. I have yet to get all the way through this rap, but not bad so far. Lemme know what you think, and link me to something of yours as well.
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8:09 pm April 2, 2012
| Mr. Flako
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u got a good sound from what i can hear good lyrics (the parts i could understand lol) flow is definitely there u got any trax recorded yet?
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http://www.reverbnation.com/azflako
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8:20 pm April 2, 2012
| unknowncrypt
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Thanks man. Yeah recording in that fashion leaves a bit to be desired as far as understandability when the flow gets tricky. I like to line shit up so it makes people listen more than once to catch it all though too. But yeah I have quite a bit recorded. Here is a recorded track I had a dude jump on. I'm on Verse 1, the chorsuses, and outro. Dude named TazeRock is on the second.
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10:25 pm April 2, 2012
| KayR
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The one thing you need to work on is making sure that you decide to spit bars that will fit in the actual bar count. If that makes sense. It kind of sounds like you are trying to cram to many syllables into lines. I like the delivery a lot and the lyrics, from what I can tell. You've got some skill my man. I've done a video like this before.
Return the feedback:
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..ed#p334693
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10:58 pm April 2, 2012
| unknowncrypt
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Fitting too many syllables into lines and making it sound good is my style. I often write shit that is hard for me to get it all in smoothly, but that's why this was a test run video. If I can fit everything in the lines too easily I feel bored when I rap. Plus, everybody is doing the fast thing now, I gotta do something a little different.
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