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6:07 pm
September 8, 2008
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PK
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http://www.myspace.com/estsound
1/3 songs i wanna drop in sum time now
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7:34 pm
September 8, 2008
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jgstocktoncali209
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lol tha intro is hela funny..folks gon b like wuh???
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9:40 pm
September 8, 2008
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shadow
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lmfao the intro is the best part of the song….hahhaah, liked it still…. but the chorus could be much better
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10:03 pm
September 8, 2008
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countryboi_91
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nice track..few minor things that could have been better..but good shit overall
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the intro=funny. roflmao. Here is what I honestly think would have made the hook better (yeah i agree wit shadow). You rush “de streets”. It should have been the same separation with all four of those words. I–am–the–streets. That small correction would help along with some powerful adlibs. some long hangin yeahs. Your flow seems a little forced on this one. Throw that swag on em boy. Both verses had some dubs and adlibs that were off-that made it hard to listen to and really enjoy the verses. Overall though-Good job. You’re getting better with each track man
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3:21 am
September 9, 2008
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PK
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thanks guys i appreciate de feed. i actually like de hook myself haha so dats why i kept it. bout de long yeaaaaaaaah’s. i put em in alot anyway, if i put em in more, dats all der is ina song 
yea but im tryin, my boy JG here actually mixed his parts himself for de first time.
but bout adlibs LOL. i love em, i adore em. i do like 7 tracks of em, dats why it may sound like dey r off but ill try to di it better next time 
watch out for de other 2/3 HITS im gon release soon 
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3:29 am
September 9, 2008
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King Cobra
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I think you had the right idea with the hook, just somethin missing. Adlibs or somethin on the hook like the others said…not sure what tho.
JG was sick on the track, haha….loved his verse.
PK you did good…i’m hopin you switch the style up in your next tracks…maybe go faster or just switch up your rhyme scheme…but haha, i’ve already talked to you bout that.
Overall tho, this is my 3rd time listenin in a row…i like it.
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10:51 am
September 9, 2008
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jgstocktoncali209
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thanks erybody, appreciate u takin the time to listen to this track.
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2:55 pm
September 9, 2008
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asylum the wickid
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countryboi_91 said:
nice track..few minor things that could have been better..but good shit overall
yeah i agree with you.a large portion of the song was fucked up and i wasnt feeling it.but like Cobra said,if yall fixed the hook and PK came with a better rhyme scheme then it’d be a good track.
yo PK,you definently need to work on your lines man.
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3:06 pm
September 9, 2008
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PK
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ah gimme a break. u really expect me to take ur advice on ANYTHIN ?
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