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8:29 pm
June 16, 2012


KayR

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4109

Winnipeg

11

tl2 said:

Care to RTF on a new beat i made? 


Sure thing!

1:44 pm
June 17, 2012


matness

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1165

12

Another quality drop from you. Your sound quality is really good! The sample is cool, really set the mood for the track. Your lyrics are dope, and i like “it's going down like” thing. You totally kill it from 0:59 to 1:10, that was crzy dope. Your delivery is nice, but because you don't really switch it up in 2nd and 3rd verse it gets kinda boring.

Good work! 

6:12 pm
June 17, 2012


smoke342

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 981

13

I like this track that is cool sample.

Your flow is cool and I like the switch ups.  I would say it sometimes feels like the accent you use is not natural but forced.  I think its cool but I would like to hear more natural emotiions and dialect and I think it would sound sicker.


But good track and message on this.


Check this out and jump on it if you like it.


http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..ats-collab

https://soundcloud.com/smoke342/fuk-wit-me

10:02 pm
June 17, 2012


ckrisis

Veteran

Posts: 375

houston

14

The beat was bananas.. Good Shit. 


Track wise.. this is probably 1 of the better i've heard from you… some beats you use your voice doesnt mesh well imo.. but you killed this 1. Delivery was on point, flow was crisp.. Lyrics were there too.. the only negative thing i can say about this piece is the longer than usual pause in the first verse.. good s**t.

10:50 pm
June 17, 2012


KoLyric

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 3794

15

KayGambino!!! lol, and I mean that with good intent completely. I like hearing a shadowville with that style.


The beat was cool, the sample made me  lol, but was dope.

Flow was good. 

Withered Wallflower (Nothing is Sacred) out now

3:36 am
June 18, 2012


AJay tha Kidd

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 3381

Jacksonville, FL

16

you went in on that first verse. and this beat is ill . you should produce more.

7/10

http://www.datpiff.com/AJay-tha-Kidd-Lil-am-The-Epidemic-mixtape.226982.html <—the epidemic - RH

8:22 pm
June 18, 2012


thisisrek

Adept

Posts: 202

17

Post edited 8:23 pm - June 18, 2012 by thisisrek


this s**ts cool, i like the beat a lot, your a really good producer

the lyrics and flow are dope, im not a fan of your voice, but you cant change that

the mixing is really clean, and some of the metaphors you drop are tight as hell too

overall i dont have too much hate on this track, except maybe add more emotion, but its pretty well put together

 return feed: http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..-new-track

12:22 am
June 20, 2012


KayR

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4109

Winnipeg

18

Thanks for checking it out guys. Bumping that!

6:48 am
June 20, 2012


onestophiphop

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1915

Kansas City

19

this is ill homie, i like the beat alot, lyrics seem  a little loud compared to beat, i like when u speed up, dope s**t bro, check me out when u get a moment http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..uitar-beat

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2:49 am
June 21, 2012


d-method

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1142

The Bay, South Africa

20

sick beat man, loving that, i think the lyrics were a bit loud compared to the beat especially when you first came in, then it kinda blended more. flow was nice i like the lyrics too. i could probably play this on my ipod a few times. whens the video for this one coming out????(just an idea, lol)

D-Method - My City Ft. Jah Soldier/Awall, eM Theory & Exurt coming soon!!