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6:20 pm
June 21, 2012


KayR

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4109

Winnipeg

21

d-method said:

sick beat man, loving that, i think the lyrics were a bit loud compared to the beat especially when you first came in, then it kinda blended more. flow was nice i like the lyrics too. i could probably play this on my ipod a few times. whens the video for this one coming out????(just an idea, lol)


I'm working on planning out the video currently.

6:33 pm
June 21, 2012


Deason

Veteran

Posts: 389

Clarksville, TN

22

Overall this track was pretty cool.  Not my style, but you delivered it nicely.  Concept was clever.  Sample worked nice with the beat.  Verses were dope.  Lyrics above average.  Lot of nice puns in there.  Flow was nice.  Liked it best when you chopped it up for a bit.  Mic presence was there too.  Props.


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http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..eason-solo

http://www.datpiff.com/Deason-The-931307-Connect-mixtape.351302.html

11:30 am
June 22, 2012


KayR

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4109

Winnipeg

23

Thanks Deason, I returned that feedback!

12:28 pm
June 22, 2012


fridaymusic

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 892

Omaha

24

First verse - Lyrics are goooood. Flow stays on point. The wordplay is great from you like usual.. I like how you speeded it up.

Second verse - Good punchlines and good lyrics. I like the lil singy-thing you did about half way thru the verse. And I like the “NO” background vocals. Really added in a good change.

Third verse - Rhyme scheme in the begining of this verse is real cool to me. Same feed as before.. up there ^^^

Over all 9.5/10 The beat seemed a lil empty at points which, to me, took away from the song. Pretty good tho.. Everything on point. I like the hook lol

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9:43 pm
June 22, 2012


KayR

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4109

Winnipeg

25

Thanks for the breakdown Fr!day!