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Sit Back Down- Dehart (New Single)

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9:48 pm
April 6, 2013


robby889

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Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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https://soundcloud.com/robby888/sit-back-down-dehart

any feed is returned with a link, as usual..
I think their are some good grounds on where yall can provide good criticism,, maybe parts tht I didnt hear tht sounded messy.. either way.. wht it is!

Written By. Dehart
Produced By. Dansonn (first snow)

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!


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7:56 am
April 7, 2013


robby889

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Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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ahh bump dat

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!

8:29 am
April 7, 2013


Trippie Hippie

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Posts: 2435

knoxville

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okay here we go…beats nice .first….its was good to me until you completly dropped out and it turned into something incoherent for a second….other wise your not bad,….i see where your going with the flow not my style persay but its not bad….your wordplay isnt bad….i like the way you close the verse…..i think the hook would have been better with a couple small effects….nothing big..maybe a delay or seomthing..otherwise i think you would have to listen to it a couple times to really catch what your going for there…..i love the concept here though i cant lie…. second….again not bad….on the second though i would have liked to hear you switch…..your flow hits a monotonous moment there even though your flow is kinda choppy and broken.maybe a more direct flow for a few bars …but you make your style work for you…third .i like what you did with the bridge…i would have liked to see a stronger finish on the third…your mixing is done well throughout the track….your lyrics are put together fairly and yor really own your style….like i said though there are points in the track that are kinda sloppy but it gets covered well by your flow and the type of adlibs you use….overal this is not bad….i seee what your doing here and i commend you….you could use some work but your on the right track! ill be posting a song later when i get home and ill leave the link here

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8:51 am
April 7, 2013


robby889

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Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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Thanks man!! I understand everything your talkin about.. I could hear parts that could have been better.. But I just thought these vocal files worked out just right.. thanks, I appreciate the feed!

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!

9:06 am
April 7, 2013


Trippie Hippie

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Posts: 2435

knoxville

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please return the favor if you would dear sir

http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..d-returned

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11:42 am
April 7, 2013


robby889

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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you already kno

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!

7:15 pm
April 7, 2013


robby889

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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Ahh!

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!

9:54 pm
April 7, 2013


onestophiphop

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Kansas City

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I love the beat selection, very dope, I love songs like these too where the lyrics are heart felt, quality could be better other than that dope drop, rtf

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6:54 am
April 8, 2013


robby889

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Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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thanks man!
I will get to that asap

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!

12:57 pm
April 9, 2013


robby889

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1053

Las Vegas

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^*^

In this Whole World. You May Just be One Person. But to One Person. You May Just Be the World!