just hoping to get some feedback:

I know what you do and I'm not a fan

I wanna change you, cause i can't stand

to watch you put yourself through what you do

cause I'm right here and all thats true

we can forget the past

look forwards to the future

to where our roots are

imbedded in this soil

inner turmoil past and the present

id give it all away just for you in a second

and id never think twice

its the choice that i made

I stick by my choices

the decision once made

as the vision once played

in my head so grand

I would take you far away

to a made up land

where you couldn't catch harm

me and you would latch arms

and we'd fly past mars 

to sit among stars

and this little dream of ours

and this little dream of ours

…

why think what life could of been?

Nah life's what it is and its great to be man

I do what I can every day

just to make sure

you in a happier place

when you wake up

like your face, beautiful without make up

…everyday wanna see it when I wake up

When I think of you

do you think of me?

And if I take the leap

would you then recieve?

or would you then recede

into the tumble weeds?

and cease to breathe

until I came and rescued thee?

I wanna take you on a journey,

across a whirlwind

with love and deep passion all swirled in

Id call you more than a girlfriend

you mean more than the world to your old man

and deep down, you know its true

lets hold hands and pretend things aren't askew

this isn't any old view,

nope, this ones special; its just for you