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Small Town White Rapper. Plz Give Feedback.

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3:37 pm
March 31, 2012


weedrymer09

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This is my first completed song, i would really appritiate the feedback, positive and negative. Thanks. Yell


http://soundcloud.com/tracks/s…..eedrymer09

Them dudes is actors, me ima factor. -Jay Jenkins


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3:45 pm
March 31, 2012


Elivated

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Above You

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another white rapper, and from a small town

shit dog you make number 1

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3:49 pm
March 31, 2012


weedrymer09

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Posts: 3

3

gotta have a headline that relates to people!

Them dudes is actors, me ima factor. -Jay Jenkins

5:46 pm
March 31, 2012


Ridikarus

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Post edited 5:48 pm - March 31, 2012 by Ridikarus


…… is this guy for real? Why does telling people your white help them relate to you in any way? Nobody cares. And “check my shit I do my thing whassup was happnin?” Improve before you post again. Please.

www.vibedeck.com/ridikcypher

6:56 pm
March 31, 2012


ninov

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ey bro, ya leave out the white rapper part, i myself dont wanna be compared to slim and the other ones. but half the fools on here are haters puttin out garbage so dont rely simply on here. watch for me and my boys winning this contest.

for a first song it wasnt bad but it needs some work for sure. practice makes perfect. yer tonesare a little off and the hook is a little to repetative for my taste. and if its yer first song i wouldnt talk bout bein bein on top and shit like that.

but dont let haters hold you back, do yer thing. where you from?

10:45 am
April 8, 2012


weedrymer09

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Posts: 3

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im from indiana dog, aint much here. atleast you wasnt a dick about it 


Them dudes is actors, me ima factor. -Jay Jenkins

1:38 pm
April 8, 2012


baby_lette

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