I dont think you really matched the beat for me on this one, your flow was on and off, at first especially. i think playing around more with the depth of your vocals would help give it more substance, like adlibs etc.

try getting on something with a different beat

stay up

true concept said:

Thanks for the feedback yo. I have been struggling with riding the beat a bit. I feel I have the lyrics but need to keep working til I get it right.  If you wouldn't mind checking out a few of my other tracks, you can go to http://www.reverbnation.com/jprops n c what u think of my tracks payin dues n athlete turned artist.

As far as your music goes: nice flow, decent tracks, definitely a positive message.

Catch u later

Thanks for the feed on mine. yeah i can see like,you got the potential its just working on the flow man, maybe we could colab one day.

let me know