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7:27 am June 7, 2012
| tl2
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2:17 pm June 7, 2012
| Lucid
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2:58 pm June 7, 2012
| tl2
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8:24 pm June 7, 2012
| tl2
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9:24 am June 8, 2012
| Lucid
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11:09 am June 8, 2012
| tl2
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Lucid said:
well gee.
Nobody likes us.
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2:45 pm June 8, 2012
| WarLock
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No offense TL but I'm not the biggest fan of your flow in the second verse. It seems like it was stop and go a lot. On the first verse it sounds okay but the mic seems a bit low quality. On the hook it's okay but it peaks and sounds really crowded to me. Lucid your verse was the best in my opinion. It flowed well, mixing was clear and good quality and it was a great closer. Overall I'd give it a 5/10, maybe a 7/10 with a better mic and mixing
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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2:47 pm June 8, 2012
| WarLock
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Also on the first verse at the end where you sped it up it sounds like you mumbled a bit and it doesn't sound too good
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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2:51 pm June 8, 2012
| WarLock
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Just noticed the “Something we assholes got” line, it made me lol
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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3:03 pm June 8, 2012
| Lucid
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