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3:56 pm
August 10, 2012
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james450
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Post edited 4:04 pm - August 10, 2012 by james450
Check out Donovan James - Talking to myself at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v…..1UXzHad-Lo
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4:10 pm
August 10, 2012
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Lyric
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decent song, only problem i really had that kept me from enjoying the song is the delivery.
You only get better though.
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Bound by truth but chased by lies
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6:40 am
August 11, 2012
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EV of Dezekration
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iunno, ima disagree with Lyric, I liked the delivery, the flow was pretty uniique and it progressed along nicely. Your mixing could use a little work, the breaths were taking away from the flow a bit, but other then that, good shit man.
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I rock mic’s with a venom so vicious That if you bare witness you might as well proceed straight on to unexistin.
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10:16 pm
August 18, 2012
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james450
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Thanks guys, I appreciate it your feedback. The entire song was done in one take. I thought about taking the breaths out but I didn’t one too lol in defense of the mix please do not judge songs based on how the sound from youtube. youtube doesnt not give you the full quality of how your songs truly sound. if you have not heard the mixtape please don’t judge the quality. this has been the first time in years someone has given me feedback on my music so i really appreciate that. thanks once again
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5:41 am
August 19, 2012
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treece
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I’ma sit between the two and say the delivery was dope just hard to understand sometimes.
I liked all of this man. The video was cool and the song was sick. Beat is insane too.
Great drop my dude.
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..r-feedback
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5:53 am
August 19, 2012
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Eder
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I really liked the track man and the video was good too keep it up man I remember doing a track with you long time ago it was the nike boots remix song.
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3:55 am
August 20, 2012
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james450
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thanks man. and eder yea we did a track some years ago it was the Nike Boots remix. your verse you spit on that track was raw!! those were the days man
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