I liked some things then I didn’t like some things.
I liked your lyrics man, I liked how you stayed on topic, and your delivery was pretty good.
I wasn’t as impressed with your voice and your mic presence. For example when you say “put em in line”. WHen you come in with that. You come in with that with some force. I would have liked to see the whole hook like that. All the verses like that. A little more emotion. Make em feel it dawg.
stay up