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tell me your opinion

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8:48 pm
May 12, 2008


kingrap223

Underling

posts 23

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well here i am again this is from my album (which i’m still working on) comments and advice would be much appreciated here we go

emotion is like junk in ur drains/ and wen it clogs in ur brains/ it makes u go insane/ and u don’t see things clear and plain/ you walk around and see remains/ of women and children/ and instead of fitted and jeans niggas is dressin like pilgrims/ all them dead souls i feel em/ and i grieve 4 em too/ i say 4 everyone to reach 4 tha top cause that’s wat i believe we can do/ you gotta go 100 percent instead of only 42/ and it’s true one man’s trash is another man’s treasure/ but y settle for trash wen u could get something better/ u could dress even fresher/ house bigger than u could even measure/ get a credit card wit out even havin any pressure/ you see the truth is money is power/ and dependin on the way it’s used it could either help or devour/ either you could be famous like the eiffel tower/ or you cud get put in the dirt like a flower/ the meaning of my lyrics don’t jus wash away in the shower/ cause there strong they’ll make ur face squench like u ate somethin sour/ so you should listen close wen i’m spittin in the booth/ cause it’s like the courts i spit all and nothin but the truth/


6:22 am
May 27, 2008


chill-ez

Foot Soldier

posts 64

2

its good its good

keep it up

11:48 am
May 30, 2008


tru story

Rookie

posts 10

3

That’s what’s up man. Maybe some more multi’s but besides that I like it.

 
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