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5:15 pm
September 12, 2008
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tizzy4
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This is a work in progress..feed back is appreciated..a little intro I worked on http://www.zshare.net/audio/18667923eeb3c1ba/
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6:18 pm
September 12, 2008
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i like it lol all i gatta say
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9:46 pm
September 12, 2008
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Turtle
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You bring that grumpy hard ass voice and surprise us with that flow you drop. The multis and how you link your rhymes is sick, but for me it got hella repetitive. Like for the first verse I was bumping my head, specially with that nasty hook. But by the second verse I stopped bumping to it, ’cause it got way too repetitive, it even felt like it was the first verse all over again with different rhymes. I don’t mind talking about haters even though it’s beginning to get old. But the idea of having rhymes sort of dissing “us” or “haters” (ex. “we will shatter your dream”) over and over on each verse (even on the hook) got hella repetitive for me.
Good track overall, I’m sure if the finished product was on radio, all ‘em hood cats would bang that shit. But if you want to target the more “intellectual” audience per say, then come up for more unique concepts, but keep the nasty flow/voice.
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11:30 pm
September 12, 2008
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tizzy4
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rubs said:
You bring that grumpy hard ass voice and surprise us with that flow you drop. The multis and how you link your rhymes is sick, but for me it got hella repetitive. Like for the first verse I was bumping my head, specially with that nasty hook. But by the second verse I stopped bumping to it, ’cause it got way too repetitive, it even felt like it was the first verse all over again with different rhymes. I don’t mind talking about haters even though it’s beginning to get old. But the idea of having rhymes sort of dissing “us” or “haters” (ex. “we will shatter your dream”) over and over on each verse (even on the hook) got hella repetitive for me.
Good track overall, I’m sure if the finished product was on radio, all ‘em hood cats would bang that shit. But if you want to target the more “intellectual” audience per say, then come up for more unique concepts, but keep the nasty flow/voice.
Thanks for da feedback..That track and every other track I have put up is umm old..and yes it does sound repetitive.I have been trying to sway away from that type of flow. .I see that you are a more Nas type of guy .I likes u already I thought there was no one left who knew what Hiphop was.. Believe me when I say this I have alot of concept story telling songs minus talking about haters over and over (LOl)that I have recorded..I just haven’t put them on here ..Been too busy with other projects ..But I promise u this I will hit u up when I get something for ya ears..I have been working on finding a beat to some shit I wrote about My mom and my friends that have passed away..But I Haven’t been in the mood so I guess I lost focus on what I was doing..and that is not all this diss and hate song garbage I have been doing..Man I have been to more funerals through the yrs then Niggas going through pairs of shoes..I think I am back on da right track now with the songs I am recording now..
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11:53 pm
September 12, 2008
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tizzy4
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rubs said:
You bring that grumpy hard ass voice and surprise us with that flow you drop. The multis and how you link your rhymes is sick, but for me it got hella repetitive. Like for the first verse I was bumping my head, specially with that nasty hook. But by the second verse I stopped bumping to it, ’cause it got way too repetitive, it even felt like it was the first verse all over again with different rhymes. I don’t mind talking about haters even though it’s beginning to get old. But the idea of having rhymes sort of dissing “us” or “haters” (ex. “we will shatter your dream”) over and over on each verse (even on the hook) got hella repetitive for me.
Good track overall, I’m sure if the finished product was on radio, all ‘em hood cats would bang that shit. But if you want to target the more “intellectual” audience per say, then come up for more unique concepts, but keep the nasty flow/voice.
as a matter of fact I have a beat I found that I just flowed on..I need your opinion on it..If My voice is right for it..go check out the track called No Bail
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