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6:03 am
June 16, 2012
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d-method
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Post edited 6:38 am - June 16, 2012 by d-method
This is my verse for joes colab, i posted it on his thread but wanna get some feed from everyone else too. just leave a link i'll return afterwards
im on 2nd verse
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6:28 am
June 16, 2012
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neeko487
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Nice overall. Flow descent, lyrics fit nice for the song. Felt coudl've had a bit more “oomph” to your delivery, still solid.
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6:39 am
June 16, 2012
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d-method
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Thanks man appreciate the feed
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9:56 am
June 16, 2012
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jsgrave
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Flow was on point, Delivery fell off for a second at 2:09 but you brought it back before it could hurt the track. Lyrics were good, Liked the rhyme scheme, keep up the work.
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2:50 pm
June 16, 2012
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Lucid
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d-method said:
Post edited 6:38 am - June 16, 2012 by d-method
This is my verse for joes colab, i posted it on his thread but wanna get some feed from everyone else too. just leave a link i'll return afterwards
im on 2nd verse
Memorize your verse more and just deliver a little more and you'll be way better. flow is good.
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9:11 pm
June 16, 2012
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☆TRUSS-C!TY☆
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d-method said:
Post edited 6:38 am - June 16, 2012 by d-method
This is my verse for joes colab, i posted it on his thread but wanna get some feed from everyone else too. just leave a link i'll return afterwards
im on 2nd verse
Flow was Sic Spit to me. GJ
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11:31 am
June 17, 2012
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KayR
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The delivery could use more power. Your voice just sounds a little tentative, and the mix is a little quiet. The dubs on “syllables” are a little messy because their sorta of. The lyrics aren't to bad though, and the rhyme scheme is there. The flow has potential but you slip once or twice. Overall, not too bad.
Return the feedback:
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..f-produced
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1:34 pm
June 17, 2012
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matness
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Like the others said you just need more power in your delivery, cause it's a dope verse. IMO all your dubs was either bad mixed or something because they didn't sound that good to me.
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1:39 am
June 18, 2012
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d-method
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Appreciate all the feed.
@KayR, i'll get on that feed now man.
@matness i'll get those dubs fixed man
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9:56 am
June 18, 2012
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smoke342
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Post edited 9:56 am - June 18, 2012 by smoke342
Sounds like a dope track I really liked that first dudes verse.
Dmethod your shit is getting better good confidence and I would like to hear the vocals turned up somehow.
Good shit best track I have heard associated with NWL.
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..nn#p341953
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