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Total Loss pro. SkulliTune Feedback returned?

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10:22 am
June 5, 2012


WarLock

Veteran

Posts: 277

Ringgold, GA

1

“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6


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1:15 pm
June 6, 2012


-young o-

Disciple

Posts: 10

Dallas,Tx

2

This is a solid track fam.Everything is on point on here the only problem i really had was that the hook sounded like you put to much reberb,but i guessing thats what u were trying to do.Other than that i was vibing to this.Good shit homie

8:21 pm
June 15, 2012


thisisrek

Adept

Posts: 181

3

sorry it took so long to return,

as young O said, i think this track is solid, not too many weak points, im not a huge fan of your voice(maybe just your delivery) but i think other people will like it, your lyrics are good, and i like the concept a lot, the mixing is on point too, although i do hear the over-reverb on the hook

overall 7/10 just keep writing and working on lyrics, and i think you could turn out to be a dope ass emcee

6:20 am
June 16, 2012


d-method

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1049

4

pretty good track, didnt really feel the hook, lyrically.

in the verse i thought it was pretty good. i agree with rek, im not a fan of the delivery but the concept was cool, maybe r write the hook in a more lyrical creative way. keep it up though man


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