sorry it took so long to return,
as young O said, i think this track is solid, not too many weak points, im not a huge fan of your voice(maybe just your delivery) but i think other people will like it, your lyrics are good, and i like the concept a lot, the mixing is on point too, although i do hear the over-reverb on the hook
overall 7/10 just keep writing and working on lyrics, and i think you could turn out to be a dope ass emcee