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Trey Cat - “How Can We Stop This” (An Iraq Story)

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5:37 pm
April 1, 2008


Trey Catalyst

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Birmingham

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and yo, thanks again for everyone’s feedback, i got the idea of what i gotta do for my next track now, unless anyones got any other points?

I Leave Girls Missin Periods, Like They Got Bad Grammar.

5:39 pm
April 1, 2008


Trey Catalyst

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Posts: 322

Birmingham

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Slantize said:

Rate this kid because he came humble in his post request, not lil flash style.



ok, im 13, theres no need to rub it in lol

I Leave Girls Missin Periods, Like They Got Bad Grammar.

2:34 am
April 4, 2008


shadestone

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Lyrics: If I may quote Peter Griffin "While I don’t agree with what you said, I’ll defend to the death your right to say it." Good lyrics dude. 

Beat: Loved it, good find and it works good with the song.

Quality: As others have pointed out, presence and emotion. Remember, the best way to tell a story is to believe in it, and straight up pour your or the characters emotions into it. Also I don’t know if you’ve tried this but sometime just get on the mic and f**k around with different pitches, volumes, and styles with your voice, you may find something magical.

Overall: 2.5 out of 5 

12:52 pm
April 4, 2008


alsamawi

Fresh Meat

Posts: 2

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Keep up the good work bro!, peyz!