Yo man. the lyrics aren't bad I like the baseball mits line. talked about pretty generic stuff.
I felt like ya were reading off a screen too focused on saying the lines instead of the delivery.. practice the flow and delivery making it sound smoother and appealing to the ears.. your rhyming good though.. on the hook I suggest adding a layer vocal too it with a lil reverb a background echo and maybe a chorus effect or slight distortion panned to one side.. something that switches and adds a fuller sound
keep it up man!